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Need help finishing up a poem.

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behappyeveryday

Tue, Aug 26 2014, 6:37 pm

Below is a few lines. After the second paragraph I'd like to add three four lines about a salad bowl.
Any ideas?

Heres a gift for the new wife-to-be,
some recipes to entice your new hubby

A recipe book and some tools of the trade,
to create meals gourmet, and desserts handmade!

______ we are certain that even without all this gear,
You will definitely be the cook of the year!

But if you're ever in the need of a kitchen confidante,
feel free to call any ready, willing and able aunt!

Tia

mummiedearest

Tue, Aug 26 2014, 6:51 pm

so here's to your cookery. and to top it all off
we suggest from your head this large bowl you doff
unless you don't want a fashionable haircut.
that's the end of the poem. we can't rhyme "haircut."

acemom

Tue, Aug 26 2014, 8:59 pm

Seems fine without mentioning the bowl IMO. "Tools of the trade" includes it too.

What a sweet poem!

penguin

Tue, Aug 26 2014, 9:31 pm

Heres a gift for the new wife-to-be,
some recipes to entice your new hubby

I don't like the rhythm of this.

Here's a gift for the soon to be wife
Here's to cooking for your husband for a long happy life.

mema613

Tue, Aug 26 2014, 9:32 pm

To add to your meal
A vegi or two
This new salad bowl
Will be just right for you!

Dolly Welsh

Tue, Aug 26 2014, 9:33 pm

Since we're on a roll
We thought we'd include a new salad bowl

There's nothing hard about mixing oil and vinegar
Soon you will be the next Rayna Simnegar

mema613

Tue, Aug 26 2014, 9:57 pm

A cookbook is yours
With ideas galour
Please do feel free
To come up with more!

To add to your meal
A veggie or two
This new salad bowl
Will be just right for you!

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