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I need help with a short poem for Purim



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lotte




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Feb 25 2007, 6:20 pm
I know so many of you here are so talented and I was wondering if you can PLEASE help me with a short poem (6-8 lines only.)
I am sending sholach-manos to my clients and I want to thank them for giving me business and say Happy Purim.TIA
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FINKEL




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Feb 25 2007, 7:00 pm
I want to you use this ocasion
to express my apreciation
for all the things you do for us
without making any fuss
your greatly apreciated please know
sometimes its hard to show how
so take this token as a gift this time
and this is how I will conclude this rhyme
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lotte




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Feb 25 2007, 7:02 pm
Thanx Finkel-beautiful! any more ideas please?
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S.Shcwartz




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Feb 25 2007, 7:07 pm
what type of clients?
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lotte




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Feb 25 2007, 7:09 pm
Women's accessories shops.
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amother


 

Post Sun, Feb 25 2007, 7:50 pm
What I have found, is it's hard to make up poems, when you really don't know who or what it's going for. What type of people? how close you are to them??? Hey, I tried, and if you want I
ll try again:) A'Freilichin Purim

Just wanted to thank you for patronizing me
On a Purim day like this I am happy with glee
It means a lot to me, for my cutomers so true
To have ones that share in things that I do
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MinnieMa




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Feb 25 2007, 7:51 pm
posten ANON by mistake!!!! The last post was mine.
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technic




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, Feb 26 2007, 3:59 am
thanks 4 ur business
I love cash
now ive got urs
I must dash

off 2 bloomies
my favourite store
hope ull soon b back
2 give me more Twisted Evil
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shalhevet




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, Feb 26 2007, 4:05 am
technic wrote:
thanks 4 ur business
I love cash
now ive got urs
I must dash

off 2 bloomies
my favourite store
hope ull soon b back
2 give me more Twisted Evil


Rolling Laughter:

technic dear,
have you ever thought
that poetry like yours
for cash could be bought?

Use your talents for profit
Ten dollars a line
And our very own teccie
Will be a success in no time.
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technic




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, Feb 26 2007, 8:38 am
it crossed my mind
I COULD b rich
but I do it free
cos im a silly b****!!! LOL
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lotte




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, Feb 26 2007, 8:40 am
technic wrote:
it crossed my mind
I COULD b rich
but I do it free
cos im a silly b****!!! LOL


KEWL technic... LOL keep 'em coming...
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technic




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, Feb 26 2007, 9:12 am
its a pleasure doing business
w a client such as u
and now that weve reached purim
I know just what I should do...

mishloach manot is a way to
say that I appreciate
the way we work 2gether
so enjoy - and celebrate!!!
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happyone




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, Feb 26 2007, 9:47 am
If it’s a cosmetic/accessories place, maybe put in a mini perfume sample and you could use part of this.


All year long I extend my services to you
I try my best to please, and offer something new
I attempt to accommodate your needs and your every changing style
It’s my goal to personalize your care – so you’re not just another file

Now that Purim’s here, I’ve sat down to reflect
My clients, my customers, the those who’s cash I collect
I appreciate your business and the fact that you come to me
In a world of competition – I “scents” your loyalty
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technic




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, Feb 26 2007, 10:34 am
I c ive got serious competition - I like that!!! Very Happy
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chayadeebee




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Mar 16 2016, 10:38 am
any help for a cute purim poem for curious george theme and man with teh yellow hat theme?
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