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amother

Vermilion

Mon, May 15 2017, 11:50 am

Your piece has a lot of potential.

I would suggest you scale back on your sentence length.

Experiment with shorter sentences. Three word sentences. Six word sentences. One word sentences.

Long sentences tend to muddle your message and make your reader lose focus and interest.

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