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Poem needed please - 'join us'



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noosheen




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Oct 22 2017, 4:25 pm
I want to come up with a cute poem with 'join us' as my theme. For my sons upcoming bar m. This is for out of town guests' packages who will be staying at hosts homes.

As creative as I am, I am very unpoetic. So please help me oh talented group of women! I would really appreciate it!!

Doesn't have to be anything too long - something along the lines of ' it's finally here' or/and 'thanks so much for coming' etc etc.
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thunderstorm




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Oct 22 2017, 5:49 pm
We are so happy you can join us
On this festive occasion
In honor of ( fill in son's name)'s
Bar Mitzvah celebration
We are sure that traveling
Leads to much aggravation
But you packed and shlepped anyway
And we are full of appreciation
It makes our simcha that much more special, with your participation
Thank you for joining us in our simcha
And for accepting the invitation
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noosheen




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Oct 22 2017, 5:54 pm
Thank you!
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noosheen




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Oct 22 2017, 6:26 pm
Anyone else?
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mommy3b2c




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Oct 22 2017, 6:38 pm
Thank you for coming,
From far, far away.
So glad you can join us,
For this special day.

We've been shopping and prepping and cooking mounds too,
We've been been eagerly counting,
The days,
As have you,

Now it's finally here,
Now it's finally come,
We're so glad you can join us,
And so is our son!!!!!!
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noosheen




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Oct 22 2017, 6:44 pm
Thanks so much!
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