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Happy:)2
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 Sat, Feb 17 2018, 9:14 pm
Hi all.
My family is dressing up like lifeguards. I bought water, ripple potato chips, jelly fish, go fish, and whistle lolly pops.
Can one of you awesome poem makers help me make a poem that incorporates the food I bought and something about purim?
Thanks tonz!!! 
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skee
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Sat, Feb 17 2018, 10:50 pm
| Happy:)2 wrote: | Hi all.
My family is dressing up like lifeguards. I bought water, ripple potato chips, jelly fish, go fish, and whistle lolly pops.
Can one of you awesome poem makers help me make a poem that incorporates the food I bought and something about purim?
Thanks tonz!!! |
Lifeguards keep us safe as we dive into the pool,
Or ride each wave and ripple in the ocean so cool.
So when you're in the water, whether swimming, surfing, or fishin',
If the lifeguard blows his whistle make sure to stop and listen.
(Or substitute "when we're in the water" and "we [your last name]s make sure to stop and listen.")
The Jews in Achashveirosh's kingdom were in serious trouble,
But they perceived Hashem's "whistle" and did teshuvah on the double.
The greatest "Lifeguard" of all saved them from the hot water they were in,
And each Purim we recall this neis with gratitude and celebration.
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Happy:)2
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Sat, Feb 17 2018, 10:59 pm
wow that was awesome! thanks so much!
I really appreciate it!
have a great Purim 
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skee
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Sat, Feb 17 2018, 11:06 pm
| Happy:)2 wrote: | wow that was awesome! thanks so much!
I really appreciate it!
have a great Purim |
My pleasure. You can of course put the significant words like water, ripple, etc. In bold or underline them or put them in a different color font.
Another option to replace the last line:
And the ripple effects of this neis are felt in every generation.
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skee
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Sat, Feb 17 2018, 11:09 pm
| skee wrote: | My pleasure. You can of course put the significant words like water, ripple, etc. In bold or underline them or put them in a different color font.
Another option to replace the last line:
And the ripple effects of this neis are felt in every generation. |
Or try this if you want to include all the foods in the second stanza:
The greatest "Lifeguard" eFiSHently saved them from the hot water they were in,
And the ripple effects of this neis are felt in every generation.
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Happy:)2
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Sat, Feb 17 2018, 11:11 pm
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even better!! thanx for your time!!! WOW!!!!
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skee
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Sat, Feb 17 2018, 11:13 pm
| Happy:)2 wrote: | | even better!! thanx for your time!!! WOW!!!! |
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bobeli
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Sun, Feb 18 2018, 9:30 am
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skee you are so talented can you help with a zoo theme?
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skee
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Sun, Feb 18 2018, 10:55 am
| bobeli wrote: | | skee you are so talented can you help with a zoo theme? |
Thank you for the compliment. What specifically are you dressing up as? And what foods do you plan to include?
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Happy:)2
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Mon, Feb 19 2018, 6:07 pm
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skee..... can I ask you one more thing?
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