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chani173
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 Sun, Mar 08 2009, 1:46 am
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Can anyone please help with a chocolate theme shelach manos poem? I'm really terrible at writing poems. Thanks.
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Tamiri
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Sun, Mar 08 2009, 5:42 am
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Check out Charlie and the Chocolate factory. The Oompa Loompas had great poems/songs. You may get ideas from there.
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merelyme
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Sun, Mar 08 2009, 9:33 am
Chocolate is great,
Chocolate is yum,
I’m so glad it’s Purim,
Chocolate, here I come.
I hope you enjoy
This chocolate too
It’s to bring Purim cheer
From us to you.
Happy Purim from the Blanks!
If you want a specific idea or line included in a different poem, let me know. This is one is a little silly.
Happy Purim from me, too!
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chani173
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Sun, Mar 08 2009, 12:49 pm
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The poem is great. Last night I was thinking about something like, instead of alcohol eat chocolate, as in chocaholics and not alcoholics. I have small bottles of alcohol I can include in the shalach manos. I don't know if any cute poems can come from that, since I am hopeless when it comes to poems. Thanks for you help. It is really appreciated.
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Mrs.K
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Sun, Mar 08 2009, 12:53 pm
I thought you meant those poems with the name of popular chocolate bars as lines in the poem. I've seen it done before in really adorable ways, but I'm drawing a total blank now.
Something like "Hope your day is '100 grand' and you don't end up in 'Mars'".
Obviously that makes zero sense, I was just giving an illustrative example.
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chani173
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Sun, Mar 08 2009, 1:01 pm
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The problem with that would be that all the bars in my shalach manos are cholov yisroel and a lot of people I'm giving to don't know the names of the non cholov yisroel bars out there, so they wouldn't get it.
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SarahB
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Sun, Mar 08 2009, 1:08 pm
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Maybe check out the prayer said at Alcoholics Anonymous meetings and adapt it for chocolate and purim. Probably wouldn't be that hard, and it's a prayer so it's a nice wish for whomever you are giving mishloach manos to!
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merelyme
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Sun, Mar 08 2009, 1:11 pm
Cute poems can come from anything - it just takes a few minutes.
Haman or Mordechai,
Can you tell the diff?
It really is Purim,
And what do we whiff?
It's chocolate I smell -
No alcohol here!
To all chocoholics,
We wish you good cheer.
Happy Purim to all imamother readers!!
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Mrs.K
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Sun, Mar 08 2009, 1:41 pm
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Haman or Mordechai,
Can you tell the diff?
It really is Purim,
And what do we whiff?
It's chocolate I smell -
No alcohol here!
To all chocoholics,
We wish you good cheer.
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So cute!
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