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crush

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:12 pm

Wait—that song sounded strangely unforgettable! And that girl! She knew her—one way or another, but how?!

elf--you are GOOD at spotting these things! Wow! Well, I triple checked all mine and I'm pretty sure there's no wronge letters...I hope! Good job, you'd be an awesome proofreader

elf123

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:13 pm

Atali wrote:

Oops,

I tried to avoid the letters but didn't do the worlds greatest job.

Let's change "ocean" to "sea" and "lock" to "lid"

Sorry to nitpick, but now it's "....a broken lid on the lid?"

crush

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:13 pm

Shopmiami49 wrote:

But she realized that she first had to give a tenth of the treasure to tzadakah.

Lol that made me laugh LOL

crush

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:14 pm

elf123 wrote:

Atali wrote:

Oops,

I tried to avoid the letters but didn't do the worlds greatest job.

Let's change "ocean" to "sea" and "lock" to "lid"

Sorry to nitpick, but now it's "....a broken lid on the lid?"

how about "a brokwn dead bolt on the lid?" lol does that make sense at all?

Last edited by crush on Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:15 pm; edited 1 time in total

elf123

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:15 pm

crush wrote:

Why, thank you, kind sir.... (Guess what I do professionally? Oh, wait, you already did!)

crush

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:16 pm

elf123 wrote:

crush wrote:

Why, thank you, kind sir.... (Guess what I do professionally? Oh, wait, you already did!)

No way! Really?! That's so cool Smile

and now I'm emabarressed, cuz I noticed I spelled wrong "wronge" by mistake, and you for sure noticed that!

yummy2

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:58 pm

Lol!!!!

yummydd

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:09 pm

Happy you guys are keeping yourself entertained.... Very Happy

marina

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:32 pm

Then arrived a great big alligator and ate laylay. How sad.

yummy2

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:33 pm

What a party pooper. How sad

marina

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:42 pm

cleanlinen wrote:

What a party pooper. How sad

don't use P, that's part of the game. shock

sequoia

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:45 pm

We assumed the game was over, unless laylay is gonna pull a little red riding hood.

mazeltov

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:50 pm

elf123 wrote:

Atali wrote:

It was a small treasure box with a broken lock on the lid.

Sorry, that third bold letter looks suspiciously like a "c" to me!

with all the proofreading, how did nobody notice the "m" in small?

that's before the c in lock.

crush

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:53 pm

marina wrote:

Then arrived a great big alligator and ate laylay. How sad.

Well, then the alligator gently took Laylay out of his throat! Yay! And Laylay started to look for her treasure again.

I like this game! I don't want it to end, it's such fun Smile

mazeltov

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:53 pm

cleanlinen wrote:

As she got more near, thats when she saw it

and the "m" in more?

marina

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:54 pm

OY, IT IS NEVER OVER, THERE IS ALWAYS ANOTHER WAY!

Laylay davened to the Aibishter who suggested to the alligator that he throw her out on the land of Ninveh.

crush

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:58 pm

Lol, Marina, you make me laugh. But I'm continuing it, yay!

Then Laylay saw Yonah! “Oh, Yonah, tell this girl, if you will, the laws of the land”, she begged.

mindyme

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 10:02 pm

"Firstly, dry yourself. Here's a towel."

crush

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 10:16 pm

So Laylay dried herself, wringing her hair so hard that a few strands of hair tore out.

mindyme

Sun, Jul 18 2010, 11:30 pm

A bird grabbed the floating hairs to add to her nest, high in a tree.

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