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chaylizi









  


Post  Sat, Jan 10 2009, 9:39 pm
I'm usually a good writer, but I'm not amazing at poetry. I'm looking for a cute poem to sent out on thank you cards for baby presents received. I did a google search, but most of them are for baby showers & I'm having trouble adapting them, especially as most of them reference the baby not being born yet. I don't really care what it says, as long as it's written from the baby & it's relatively cute. Anyone?
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ra_mom









  


Post  Sat, Jan 10 2009, 10:05 pm
If you like short and sweet:

Our sincere thanks
For choosing a baby gift so sweet
And sending the kind of wish
That made the thought complete.
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chocolate moose









  


Post  Sat, Jan 10 2009, 10:26 pm
I think a short note is fine. a poem means you sent it to everyone. it's not necessary and maybe not even appreciated.
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sbs









  


Post  Sat, Jan 10 2009, 10:48 pm
from little baby __________,
and from his/her parents too,
thank you for your sweet (or thoughtful, or generous) gift,
it was very kind of you
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chaylizi









  


Post  Sat, Jan 10 2009, 11:00 pm
chocolate moose wrote:
I think a short note is fine. a poem means you sent it to everyone. it's not necessary and maybe not even appreciated.


I know, but then I have to think of something to write to everyone separately. I've gotten lots of thank you cards with a poem & one or two personalized lines referencing the gift I bought. I personally think it's really cute.
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shanie5









  


Post  Sun, Jan 11 2009, 12:23 am
I try to write them w/ baby info there.

My favorite one is the one I wrote for my now almost 16 yr old son:::

Yirmiyahu is my name
Troublemaking Is my game
But polite I also must be

So Respectfully I say
In a most polite way
Thanx for the gift You sent me
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Mitzvah Giraffe









  


Post  Mon, Jan 12 2009, 4:06 pm
Thanks sbs. I'm using yours
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manhattanmom









  


Post  Mon, Jan 12 2009, 4:21 pm
I'd personalize them--if you can't right a poem that is able to include a different gift for each person than maybe you shouldn't write a poem.
I'm a firm believer in writing specific and personalized notes--that have a sentence or two about that person's particular gift.
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chaylizi









  


Post  Mon, Jan 12 2009, 5:00 pm
I'm planning on writing a personal sentence or two about the specific gift. I just thought a poem would be cute.
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Mommyholic









  


Post  Mon, Jan 12 2009, 8:50 pm
Here;s what I wrote for my son if you're still searching:

I’d like to take a moment, from my babbling and cooing
And all the important stuff we babies are busy doing,
To thank you so much for your thoughtful present
It sure made my welcome here all the more pleasant,
I’m enjoying your gift; it makes me look really handsome,
My Totty and Mommy are shepping nachas and then some,
Thanks so much for your ______ gift which I'll surely treasure
May we only share in simchos together;
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Clarissa









  


Post  Mon, Jan 12 2009, 9:24 pm
Thank you so much for the gift
and especially the gift receipt
Your taste is quite abominable
Although your thought is sweet.
So excuse me now, while off I dash
It's time to return it
For the cash!
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chaylizi









  


Post  Mon, Jan 12 2009, 9:26 pm
Clarisssssa! Rolling Eyes
If you're going to make the effort already, compose something I CAN USE.

(temper tantrum over now)
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sunshine!









  


Post  Mon, Jan 12 2009, 9:30 pm
Clarissa wrote:
Thank you so much for the gift
and especially the gift receipt
Your taste is quite abominable
Although your thought is sweet.
So excuse me now, while off I dash
It's time to return it
For the cash!



I love it, do I have your permission to use this one?? Laughing
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Clarissa









  


Post  Mon, Jan 12 2009, 9:33 pm
Go for it.
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Ronit









  


Post  Wed, Jan 14 2009, 1:03 pm
sunshine! wrote:
Clarissa wrote:
Thank you so much for the gift
and especially the gift receipt
Your taste is quite abominable
Although your thought is sweet.
So excuse me now, while off I dash
It's time to return it
For the cash!



I love it, do I have your permission to use this one?? Laughing

Thumbs Up
but is anyone actually using this? Shocked
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chaylizi









  


Post  Thu, Jan 15 2009, 12:33 pm
yup. I'm sure dh's grandmother will appreciate it immensely. don't you think? Wink
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yersp









  


Post  Thu, Jan 15 2009, 1:34 pm
I have a similar one:

I am really very small and have a lot to do
Eating, crying and sleeping to name a few
But I took out of my busy schedule just
A few minutes time
To say Thank You Very Much for your gift
In this cute little rhyme!!
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#1cook









  


Post  Sun, Jan 18 2009, 10:23 pm
Mommyholic wrote:
Here;s what I wrote for my son if you're still searching:

I’d like to take a moment, from my babbling and cooing
And all the important stuff we babies are busy doing,
To thank you so much for your thoughtful present
It sure made my welcome here all the more pleasant,
I’m enjoying your gift; it makes me look really handsome,
My Totty and Mommy are shepping nachas and then some,
Thanks so much for your ______ gift which I'll surely treasure
May we only share in simchos together;


thanks I will be useing this
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ny_ima









  


Post  Sun, Jan 18 2009, 10:27 pm
I took a pic of baby with on top of pile of all the gifts and mailed it out as a postcard. personal enuf and pic worth 1000 words
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bnm









  


Post  Sun, Jan 18 2009, 10:57 pm
shanie5 wrote:
I try to write them w/ baby info there.

My favorite one is the one I wrote for my now almost 16 yr old son:::

Yirmiyahu is my name
Troublemaking Is my game
But polite I also must be

So Respectfully I say
In a most polite way
Thanx for the gift You sent me


I like this one, can I use it?
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