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amother
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Post Thu, Sep 28 2017, 12:43 am
I'm emailing a doctor that cared for my child in ICU. I gave her a small gift before she was discharged with a small thank you poem.

does this make sense to add to end of email- Thank you again for always being such a warm and caring doctor with heart? English is not my first language, and I don't want it to come across as a translated version.
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amother
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Post Thu, Sep 28 2017, 12:46 am
amother wrote:
I'm emailing a doctor that cared for my child in ICU. I gave her a small gift before she was discharged with a small thank you poem.

does this make sense to add to end of email- Thank you again for always being such a warm and caring doctor with heart? English is not my first language, and I don't want it to come across as a translated version.


Leave out "with heart."
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amother
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Post Thu, Sep 28 2017, 12:57 am
amother wrote:
Leave out "with heart."


Thanks
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zaq




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Sep 28 2017, 5:59 am
Leave in the “with heart”. It adds a nice little bit of individuality, iow makes it sound like you and not a Hallmark card. You should write the way you talk. This is not an assignment for English class.
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