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Tan
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Wed, Oct 11 2017, 3:22 am
There was a thick wall around me for so long
A wall that kept me so big and strong
With emotions and feeling kept outside
Each day was taken in a peaceful stride
came an intruder and drilled a whole very small
And my big tall wall started to fall
Letting all my emotions slide
I have no where to hide
I feel naked and raw
Every little thing throws off the straw
I feel Like drowning in high tide
Or on a fast spinning rollercoaster ride
But my smile my love is pure and clean
As there is no barrier in between
My wall of the past had died
But that is my pride
That Me myself and I had became again alive
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amother
Natural
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Wed, Oct 11 2017, 3:35 am
Wow that's really inspiring. Beautifully written
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amother
Tan
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Wed, Oct 11 2017, 10:06 am
amother wrote: | Wow that's really inspiring. Beautifully written |
Thank you so much your complement made me feel so good and helped me fall asleep I'm not a writer and it's just that I couldn't fall asleep as I was doubting myself last night why I even started therapy so I decided to write down the pro and cons of therapy and this is what come out. It's the first time I wrote something since I'm out of school
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amother
Ginger
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Wed, Oct 11 2017, 10:20 am
Very powerful writing. Beautiful. An accurate description of good therapy. Keep writing.
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amother
Tan
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Wed, Oct 11 2017, 10:27 am
amother wrote: | Very powerful writing. Beautiful. An accurate description of good therapy. Keep writing. |
Thank you so much for heartwarming words they mean a lot to me. Thanks again
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Happydance
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Wed, Oct 11 2017, 10:51 am
You articulate the feeling so many of us experience so well
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amother
Green
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Wed, Oct 18 2017, 10:02 pm
I relate a lot to what you wrote. thank you for sharing
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Boca00
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Thu, Oct 19 2017, 12:11 am
You're not a writer?? You SO are. I really was able to feel some of what you were experiencing. Very moving.
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