Can you help with wording for an ad?

amother

Goldenrod

Sun, Nov 11 2018, 7:15 pm

Messenger Service

Local and Long Distance

Professional and Discreet

718-111-1111

Anything else I should include in the ad?

amother

Seafoam

Sun, Nov 11 2018, 7:19 pm

Quick and efficient?

Same delivery? (If you will do that)

ssspectacular

Sun, Nov 11 2018, 7:23 pm

Name of your business?

simcha2

Sun, Nov 11 2018, 7:23 pm

Is there anything that sets you apart from other services? Speed, size constraints, personal interactions?

It helps to differentiate yourself.

ra_mom

Sun, Nov 11 2018, 7:29 pm

Reliable trusted courier services

amother

Goldenrod

Sun, Nov 11 2018, 7:30 pm

simcha2 wrote:

Is there anything that sets you apart from other services? Speed, size constraints, personal interactions?

It helps to differentiate yourself.

Good questions. I'll ask those who use such service what they dislike with the current service, and aim to improve on those aspects.

amother

Goldenrod

Sun, Nov 11 2018, 7:34 pm

ra_mom wrote:

Reliable trusted courier services

Powow!
Thanks!

amother

Seafoam

Sun, Nov 11 2018, 7:41 pm

amother wrote:

Good questions. I'll ask those who use such service what they dislike with the current service, and aim to improve on those aspects.

Great advice..
I think these questions should be the basis of your business model, not just the ad..

ellacoe

Sun, Nov 11 2018, 9:22 pm

Are you insured ? You might want to include that

amother

Goldenrod

Sun, Nov 11 2018, 9:45 pm

ellacoe wrote:

Are you insured ? You might want to include that

Insurance for what? If a package gets lost? Damaged? How would I know whether the damage happened before it was handed over to me?

ellacoe

Sun, Nov 11 2018, 10:41 pm

amother wrote:

Insurance for what? If a package gets lost? Damaged? How would I know whether the damage happened before it was handed over to me?

Yes insurance in case the package gets lost or damaged while in your care

amother

Goldenrod

Mon, Nov 12 2018, 5:00 am

ellacoe wrote:

Yes insurance in case the package gets lost or damaged while in your care

I would definitely pay for a replacement.

imasoftov

Mon, Nov 12 2018, 8:05 am

amother wrote:

I would definitely pay for a replacement.

No matter how much it was worth? I recommend that you figure this out before you open for business, or if you're already started, before you make promises that have the potential to bankrupt you.

amother

Goldenrod

Mon, Nov 12 2018, 6:25 pm

imasoftov wrote:

No matter how much it was worth? I recommend that you figure this out before you open for business, or if you're already started, before you make promises that have the potential to bankrupt you.

Good advice. Thanks :-)

amother

Magenta

Mon, Nov 12 2018, 7:18 pm

amother wrote:

Messenger Service

Local and Long Distance

Professional and Discreet

718-111-1111

Anything else I should include in the ad?

Discreet? What are you delivering?

Reading this ad makes me think you are doing something nefarious.

amother

Goldenrod

Mon, Nov 12 2018, 8:12 pm

amother wrote:

Discreet? What are you delivering?

Reading this ad makes me think you are doing something nefarious.

Discreet because I have a reputation for being confidential.
Maybe replace ''discreet'' with ''confidential''?