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Can you help our little Elmo write a thank you poem to docto



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amother
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Post Thu, Mar 07 2019, 1:31 pm
Hi all creative imamothers!
Since my brain is mush I would appreciate some help in writing a thank you from our little patient Elmo.
Thank you!
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amother
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Post Thu, Mar 07 2019, 1:44 pm
If its in your words - write it from you not your child.
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amother
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Post Thu, Mar 07 2019, 3:27 pm
Sorry, can't help, but it sounds really cute
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amother
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Post Thu, Mar 07 2019, 8:34 pm
Bump!
any ideas? please!!


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ChutzPAh




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Mar 07 2019, 9:36 pm
Just send a heartfelt thanks. No need for a corny poem.
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amother
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Post Thu, Mar 07 2019, 9:50 pm
ChutzPAh wrote:
Just send a heartfelt thanks. No need for a corny poem.
appreciate your input. its ok though, we all need some humor in life & her doctors will very much appreciate it. plus we recently gave them a more personal heartfelt thank you card. so this can be in purim spirit.
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amother
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Post Thu, Mar 07 2019, 11:30 pm
On Purim we dress up, and gifts of food we share
Cuz G-d may be hidden, but we all know He's there.

I needed a costume, and this one is just right
Cuz we all know that Elmo inside is pure delight.

And this gift is for you, so caring, so wise
Cuz we all know that doctors are angels in disguise.
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amother
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Post Thu, Mar 07 2019, 11:51 pm
amother wrote:
On Purim we dress up, and gifts of food we share
Cuz G-d may be hidden, but we all know He's there.

I needed a costume, and this one is just right
Cuz we all know that Elmo inside is pure delight.

And this gift is for you, so caring, so wise
Cuz we all know that doctors are angels in disguise.

Thanks Brown! It's awesome!

I wouldn't mind it a couple of lines longer though so if anyone wants to add would greatly appreciate it!

Thank you!
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amother
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Post Sun, Mar 10 2019, 12:28 am
So...

E- Enjoy these treats, and please know that we now
L- Love what you're doing, and certainly see how
M- Much you've invested, and we're not the only one
O- Over-the-top devotion - look how much you've done!

E- Each day you come, though no thanks for a while
L- Looking each patient in the eye with a smile
M- Making each day better and more giggly
O- Or as Elmo would say, TICKLE ME!
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amother
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Post Sun, Mar 10 2019, 11:58 pm
amother wrote:
So...

E- Enjoy these treats, and please know that we now
L- Love what you're doing, and certainly see how
M- Much you've invested, and we're not the only one
O- Over-the-top devotion - look how much you've done!

E- Each day you come, though no thanks for a while
L- Looking each patient in the eye with a smile
M- Making each day better and more giggly
O- Or as Elmo would say, TICKLE ME!
Elmo says thank you Brown! you're great!
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amother
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Post Wed, Mar 20 2019, 2:04 am
amother wrote:
On Purim we dress up, and gifts of food we share
Cuz G-d may be hidden, but we all know He's there.

I needed a costume, and this one is just right
Cuz we all know that Elmo inside is pure delight.

And this gift is for you, so caring, so wise
Cuz we all know that doctors are angels in disguise.

Thanks Brown!
This is truly a hit! Doctor loved it!
Now I have a question, can you refer to an NP* as 'dr'? Or how should I substitute doctor in last line?

*she truly is like one so totally deserves it, but don't know if makes sense.
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amother
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Post Wed, Mar 20 2019, 3:45 am
Does "medical professionals" make sense?
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amother
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Post Wed, Mar 20 2019, 6:41 am
or "medical team"?

...cuz we all know that medical teams are angels in disguise?
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