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Ima Piano




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Apr 23 2020, 1:20 pm
What do you learn from this poem:
By me:

Sometimes you feel like you are drowning
Like no life jackets are around you
And your life is falling apart
All your dreams are collapsing at the start
You just feel like a mess

Every string you tried pulling
Is snapping and coming just right at you
And the people you speak to,rebuff
And you just about had enough
And the boat is sinking with you inside

You are feeling now at the lowest point in your life
With no energy to fight
To fight for what's right
Your down in the dumps
And cry bitterly for help to come
Yet, you think that noone hears
You think that noone cares.

Hashem showed your neshama the life he'd be facing
And you agreed to come down
Play your part
Yes you agreed from the very start

Hashem said he will be with you
All you gotta do is ask, and he is with you
Every step of this treacherous road
Every time you feel lost and alone

Tune: Halev Sheli
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chasdie Hashem




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Apr 23 2020, 1:24 pm
Beautiful!
Just curious-did H ask-did we agree?
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Ima Piano




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Apr 23 2020, 1:30 pm
The neshama was shown what he will be facing in this world and the neshama agreed to come down.
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chasdie Hashem




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Apr 23 2020, 1:46 pm
Wow...wish knew then that will fall through lotsa times like e human being -mayb would’ve made df decision
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