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Amelia Bedelia
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 1:45 pm
pause wrote: | This sentence contains a misplaced modifier. It's not time that was stuck in traffic; it's you.
You can correct it by saying, "While being stuck in traffic, I am wasting so much time."
Anyways, I am still enjoying this game. |
Anyway
Can someone help me peel a potatoe for the chulent?
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ra_mom
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 2:48 pm
Amelia Bedelia wrote: | Anyway
Can someone help me peel a potatoe for the chulent? |
This is my pet peeve. Potato.
I need to loose weight.
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Cheiny
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 3:03 pm
ra_mom wrote: | This is my pet peeve. Potato.
I need to loose weight. |
Lose, not loose.
It’s so much better for you and I when the whether is nice and we can go outside.
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pause
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 3:17 pm
Cheiny wrote: | Lose, not loose.
It’s so much better for you and I when the whether is nice and we can go outside. |
for you and me when the weather is nice, and we...
I told for my friend she shouldn't even go in to that store, they won't be able to help her.
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Amelia Bedelia
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 5:07 pm
Amelia Bedelia wrote: | I can't believe I missed this thread while you woman were all posting here. This is one of my favorite topics! |
Can anyone find what's wrong?
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pause
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 5:10 pm
Amelia Bedelia wrote: | I can't believe I missed this thread while you woman were all posting here. This is one of my favorite topics! Amelia Bedelia wrote: | Can anyone find what's wrong? |
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pause
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 5:10 pm
My last sentence above has four errors.
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Amelia Bedelia
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 5:13 pm
Bonus points if you pronounce it correctly!
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Amelia Bedelia
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 5:17 pm
pause wrote: | for you and me when the weather is nice, and we...
I told for my friend she shouldn't even go in to that store, they won't be able to help her. |
I told my friend that she shouldn't bother going into that store. They wouldn't be able to help her.
Or should we say "the salespeople" instead of "they" since a store is inanimate?
Can you please send me the link from that shirt you ordered on Amazon? It's blue color is beautiful!
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pause
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 6:09 pm
Amelia Bedelia wrote: | I told my friend that she shouldn't bother going into that store. They wouldn't be able to help her.
Or should we say "the salespeople" instead of "they" since a store is inanimate?
Can you please send me the link from that shirt you ordered on Amazon? It's blue color is beautiful! | Yes to the bolded
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Amelia Bedelia
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 6:20 pm
pause wrote: | Yes to the bolded
Its |
And from.
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simcha4
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 10:07 pm
Amelia Bedelia wrote: | I can't believe I missed this thread while all you women were posting (here). This is one of my favorite topics! |
removed - all after were, and placed it before -you women: you is singular and women is plural, can't go together unless has a plural before. All is plural. but even like this it doesn't flow smoothly.
- I would take out women and just write - "I can't believe I missed this thread while you all were posting."
woman - women (if needed)
here is not needed, you wrote "this thread" so it's obvious that you mean here.
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Amelia Bedelia
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 10:53 pm
simcha4 wrote: | removed - all after were, and placed it before -you women: you is singular and women is plural, can't go together unless has a plural before. All is plural. but even like this it doesn't flow smoothly.
- I would take out women and just write - "I can't believe I missed this thread while you all were posting."
woman - women (if needed)
here is not needed, you wrote "this thread" so it's obvious that you mean here. |
I guess it was awkward but I was trying to find an effective way to use the word "women", so I needed that word! I guess it backfired.
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simcha4
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Tue, Dec 29 2020, 10:57 pm
Amelia Bedelia wrote: | I guess it was awkward but I was trying to find an effective way to use the word "women", so I needed that word! I guess it backfired. |
so, what are the 4 errors you said existed in your sentence?
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dankbar
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Wed, Dec 30 2020, 1:02 am
simcha4 wrote: | so, what are the 4 errors you said existed in your sentence? |
It was Pause, not her
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simcha4
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Thu, Dec 31 2020, 10:31 pm
pause wrote: | My last sentence above has four errors. |
remove above
Friday is tommorow did you cook for Shabbos already yet?
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simcha4
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Thu, Dec 31 2020, 10:34 pm
dankbar wrote: | It was Pause, not her |
Thank you.
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pause
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Thu, Dec 31 2020, 10:34 pm
simcha4 wrote: | removed - all after were, and placed it before -you women: you is singular and women is plural, can't go together unless has a plural before. All is plural. but even like this it doesn't flow smoothly.
- I would take out women and just write - "I can't believe I missed this thread while you all were posting."
woman - women (if needed)
here is not needed, you wrote "this thread" so it's obvious that you mean here. |
"You" is actually both singular and plural.
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pause
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Thu, Dec 31 2020, 10:35 pm
dankbar wrote: | It was Pause, not her |
It was Pause, not she.
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