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Writing help! NOT for a Theme!



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amother
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Post Wed, Mar 16 2022, 12:26 am
Dd is being Yehudis from the story with Eliporni.
I would like a 2 line description to write on her basket so she doesn’t have to explain to every person we meet who she is. They will just be able to read the 2-3 lines.
If anyone is good at writing and can help it would be greatly appreciated!
Thanks in advance
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amother
Sunflower


 

Post Wed, Mar 16 2022, 12:29 am
What's in the basket?
Want to know the story?
It's Eliporni's head!
In all its gory glory!
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amother
Lavender


 

Post Wed, Mar 16 2022, 4:40 am
Yehudis
Brave Heroine of the Chanukah Story



This Basket belongs to Yehudis, daughter of Yochanan Kohen Gadol
Contents: Salty Cheese and Aged Wine
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Aurora




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Mar 16 2022, 8:01 am
The guy's name wasn't Eliporni, but Holofernes.
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mfb




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Mar 16 2022, 9:36 am
Aurora wrote:
The guy's name wasn't Eliporni, but Holofernes.

I think one is the Hebrew version of his name and the other is the translation?
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Aurora




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Mar 16 2022, 9:46 am
mfb wrote:
I think one is the Hebrew version of his name and the other is the translation?


Probably true. But I seem to remember that the Hebrew version is הולופרנס
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BetsyTacy




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Mar 16 2022, 9:55 am
And he is known as Holefernes in the art world as well. (Caravaggio, Genteleschi).
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amother
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Post Wed, Mar 16 2022, 1:53 pm
Thanks for the help. I will probably go with part of sunflowers poem. Adjusted a bit to my daughters liking if I can figure out how. LOL
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