Home
Log in / Sign Up
    Private Messages   Advanced Search   Rules   New User Guide   FAQ   Advertise   Contact Us  
Forum -> Hobbies, Crafts, and Collections -> The Imamother Writing Club
Can someone help me write a short poem



Post new topic   Reply to topic View latest: 24h 48h 72h

amother
OP


 

Post Tue, Nov 15 2022, 6:44 pm
Connecting a planter to bas mitzvah. My daughter is giving out a plant pot, soil, seeds and sheet of flower stickers to every girl at her bas mitzvah. I'd like to put in a small poem connecting it yiddishkeit somehow.
Back to top

NewbeeMom




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Nov 15 2022, 7:30 pm
It's time to plant a little seed
To reap the schar of each good deed
To take responsibility for what we do
To blossom and sprout as a fellow Jew
It's a life of love and a life of toil
With strong roots to put down in our soil
Thanks for joining me in this special hour
As I mature into a beautiful flower
Back to top

amother
OP


 

Post Tue, Nov 15 2022, 8:07 pm
NewbeeMom wrote:
It's time to plant a little seed
To reap the schar of each good deed
To take responsibility for what we do
To blossom and sprout as a fellow Jew
It's a life of love and a life of toil
With strong roots to put down in our soilh
Thanks for joining me in this special hour
As I mature into a beautiful flower


If only you could see the smile on my daughter's face. You made her day .

Thank you so much!!
Back to top

NewbeeMom




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Nov 15 2022, 8:13 pm
Happy to be of service!
And mazel tov to your daughter:)
Back to top

amother
Emerald


 

Post Tue, Nov 15 2022, 10:40 pm
I just need to say that any time I see requests like this, I wonder why people are asking total strangers to write their poem/letter/thank you/mishloach manos theme...
But I opened this one out of curiosity and I thought it was so beautiful that someone took the time, whether long or short, (I wouldn't know how super talented people come up with these things!) to write a poem for an anonymous Jewish sister!
And btw, it's gorgeous!
Kol Hakavod NewbeeMom!
Back to top

amother
OP


 

Post Tue, Nov 15 2022, 10:51 pm
amother Emerald wrote:
I just need to say that any time I see requests like this, I wonder why people are asking total strangers to write their poem/letter/thank you/mishloach manos theme...
But I opened this one out of curiosity and I thought it was so beautiful that someone took the time, whether long or short, (I wouldn't know how super talented people come up with these things!) to write a poem for an anonymous Jewish sister!
And btw, it's gorgeous!
Kol Hakavod NewbeeMom!


Can't speak for anyone else, but being that I'm the one who asked I'll answer your question. I asked because there are so many talented women on here, and I am not one of them (at least not in the writing dept). I'm happy to share my talents when someone needs and I think others feel the same.
Back to top

amother
OP


 

Post Tue, Nov 15 2022, 10:53 pm
amother Emerald wrote:
I just need to say that any time I see requests like this, I wonder why people are asking total strangers to write their poem/letter/thank you/mishloach manos theme...
But I opened this one out of curiosity and I thought it was so beautiful that someone took the time, whether long or short, (I wouldn't know how super talented people come up with these things!) to write a poem for an anonymous Jewish sister!
And btw, it's gorgeous!
Kol Hakavod NewbeeMom!


I couldn't agree more. There are good people on the world.
Back to top

amother
Emerald


 

Post Tue, Nov 15 2022, 10:54 pm
amother OP wrote:
Can't speak for anyone else, but being that I'm the one who asked I'll answer your question. I asked because there are so many talented women on here, and I am not one of them (at least not in the writing dept). I'm happy to share my talents when someone needs and I think others feel the same.

I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to question your request. I am always happy to help out here in other ways that I can. I just meant that I wouldn't expect to get a real good response. But I was very touched to see that you did!
Back to top

amother
OP


 

Post Tue, Nov 15 2022, 10:56 pm
amother Emerald wrote:
I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to question your request. I am always happy to help out here in other ways that I can. I just meant that I wouldn't expect to get a real good response. But I was very touched to see that you did!


Absolutely no offense taken. I asked a question, got an answer (rather quickly) and so I'm happy ( and so is my daughter). All's good.
Back to top

amother
Clear


 

Post Tue, Nov 15 2022, 11:00 pm
A seed is grown,
The baby nest you have flown.
It blossoms so well.
For all to tell
We water the seed.
And take out a weed.
Each mitzvah done is like the beautiful sun.
Shining on the flower.
And giving it power.
You each have it in you.
To flourish to.
Follow hashems ways,
See the the beauty in all days.
Take this opportunity to grow.
And let life flow.
And youll bevome a flower so bright.
That shines with all its might!
Back to top

amother
OP


 

Post Tue, Nov 15 2022, 11:03 pm
amother Clear wrote:
A seed is grown,
The baby nest you have flown.
It blossoms so well.
For all to tell
We water the seed.
And take out a weed.
Each mitzvah done is like the beautiful sun.
Shining on the flower.
And giving it power.
You each have it in you.
To flourish to.
Follow hashems ways,
See the the beauty in all days.
Take this opportunity to grow.
And let life flow.
And youll bevome a flower so bright.
That shines with all its might!



Wow! So beautiful. Now I'm gonna have to choose one. But which one? Maybe I'll have my daughter choose.

Thanks for taking the time to write it up.
Back to top
Page 1 of 1 Recent Topics




Post new topic   Reply to topic    Forum -> Hobbies, Crafts, and Collections -> The Imamother Writing Club

Related Topics Replies Last Post
Can someone help me find my size in dress blank clothing?
by amother
4 Yesterday at 12:44 pm View last post
Looking for an affordable short term rental in monsey Etc. 2 Mon, Mar 25 2024, 12:20 am View last post
Which magazines or sites can I write for fast?? 1 Fri, Mar 22 2024, 11:24 am View last post
Purim poem help
by amother
9 Thu, Mar 21 2024, 3:32 pm View last post
What to write on son's rebbi thank you card??
by amother
3 Thu, Mar 21 2024, 12:16 am View last post