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avimom




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, Sep 17 2007, 9:16 pm
I need a poem (any length, any kind) to send home with my yom kippur project. It's a magnet with the tefila for parents to say for their children. Something about davening for our children on yom kippur???.....
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rainbow




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, Sep 17 2007, 9:33 pm
Are you paying for someone to do this? Yidish, English, Hebrew?
I do poems but not sure you wanna pay for this.
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technic




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Sep 18 2007, 3:26 am
daven 4 ur kinderlach -
that they dont turn out lazy,
or wake u nites, or fight each other -
"WASNT me, was RAIZY!!!"

on second thoughts - 4get all that -
normality is hazy...
just beg Hashem 2 calm them down
b4 they drive u crazy Very Happy
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drumjj




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Sep 18 2007, 3:28 am
I like it!!
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technic




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Sep 18 2007, 3:33 am
strangely enuf, so do I Wink

(ty)
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avimom




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Sep 18 2007, 7:36 pm
Very Happy Very Happy That's hysterical!!! Thanks, but can anyone think of a little more serious one? No, I don't want to pay- I can think of one myself really, but I'm too tired.
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avimom




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Sep 18 2007, 8:22 pm
anyone??
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stargazer




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Sep 18 2007, 9:33 pm
How about this:

Yom Kippur is a holy time
For Teshuva and to pray
That in the coming year
Only good will come our way.

Parents add a special tefila
Filled with many tears
They ask Hashem for brachos
For their children so dear.
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greenfire




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Sep 18 2007, 9:41 pm
techies is cute ... as usual (hilarious I might add)

and mommy2be ... is just what you need ...

I was too lazy too ... but certainly fun to read ...
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bashinda




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Sep 18 2007, 10:02 pm
technic's reminds me of Abie Rotenberg / Moshe Yes Middos Machine.
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lamplighter




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Sep 18 2007, 11:14 pm
techie ur hysterical.
I don't know if ur still looking but I love poems so...

Once a year, on yom kippur
opportnity is granted
to daven for assistance
in all that we've been handed

On this special day,
lets take the time to ask
for the kochos and brochos needed
for this most important task.

Avinu malkeinu
beseech our father above
for only He truly knows
the gift of a childs love.

One needs abundant blessings
as you nurture and you sow
this special little Neshama
that will blossom as it grows.

"Father in Heaven
as your child I turn to you
show me
guide me
give me strength
Avinu Malkeinu"
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technic




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Sep 19 2007, 3:07 am
ty all 4 ur nice comments embarrassed

la - I bow my head in admiration Very Happy
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greenfire




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Sep 19 2007, 9:37 am
wow la456 ... very special indeed!!!
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Hashem_Yaazor




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Sep 19 2007, 11:04 am
Hashem, please help my children grow
And guide them in the way they go.
Fill them with fear and love for You
And may they always be Torah true.

As I start my year with a clean slate,
I pray that bracha be their fate.
In the merit of our ancestors many years before,
My children too should receive good this Yom Kippur.

Ok, a little forced, but I needed to do a poem; it's been too long.
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avimom




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Sep 19 2007, 7:47 pm
Very Happy Very Happy Yes WOW!!!! In my wildest dreams I never thought I'd get such amazing poems!!! You guys are incredible!!! Now I knw where to go Purim time for my shalach manos!!!! Very Happy Very Happy Thank you tons!!
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technic




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Sep 20 2007, 3:00 am
H Y Thumbs Up
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Hashem_Yaazor




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Sep 20 2007, 11:14 am
Thanks, technic.
I'm actually cringing as I re-read it. I used to write poems but I think I lost my touch Sad
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