Need a nice poem for my 20yr old daughters gift

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Taupe

Tue, Mar 27 2018, 5:47 pm

im looking for a nice poem. I know there are so many talented imamothers here. it really means alot for me to write her something nice. its the first expensive and big gift I got her. and I want her to know I love her. if you can help me I would so so appreciate it. thank you in advance.

I bought her a heart necklace. it means a lot to me. since my divorce she has not been living in my house for over 5 yrs. we have contact and she comes to me. but her residence is not in my home.

she has been in sem for this year and coming home for pesach. and will visit me. just giving the details as I hope this explains things a bit.

thunderstorm

Tue, Mar 27 2018, 5:58 pm

If you PM Me and provide some more information I can write one for you but I want it to sound personal and the more info I have the more personal I can make it.
Or instead of writing a poem I would suggest you sit on the couch and make believe she is sitting in front of you . Talk and express what you want to tell her , either record yourself of write down what you are saying. Nothing compares to words spoken from a mother directly to her daughter.

amother

Taupe

Tue, Mar 27 2018, 6:06 pm

I really appreciate your quick response.
I would like to stay anonymous as I did write alot of personal information.

look it doesnt have to be anything complicated. I just want it to be heartfelt and meaningful.

thank you so much! Very Happy

thunderstorm

Tue, Mar 27 2018, 6:30 pm

As I take a break from cleaning
And dry my hands from suds and water
I want to express my love to you
(Insert name), my dearest daughter

Even though you've been so far
Throughout the year
You remain close to my heart daily
and I am overflowing with love and care

I think of you daily, nightly
And every time in between
I have so much love for you
More than you have ever seen

I wish we had more opportunities
To spend more time together
Every moment spent with you is precious
No matter the time zone, no matter the weather

I am so happy to finally see you,
My beloved beauty, with her contagious smile
You bring me so much joy to me
With your own unique style

Having you in my life
I feel so blessed
I am so thankful to have you as my child
And I hope my feelings are adequately expressed

I just wanted to give you a small gift
That you can keep close to your heart
It will remind you how of much I love you
Even when we are far apart

I daven for you and always ask the
One above
To shower you with all things good
With His infinite love

I want to wish you a Gut Yom Yov
May it be thus far your very best
Enjoy every moment
And make sure to get some rest!

Your Loving Mother

Last edited by thunderstorm on Tue, Mar 27 2018, 10:17 pm; edited 3 times in total

dancingqueen

Tue, Mar 27 2018, 6:34 pm

Op I strongly recommend that your card be filled with your own heartfelt words to your dd, not someone else’s poem. Especially in this kind of delicate situation.

Purple2

Tue, Mar 27 2018, 10:08 pm

Thunderstorm, you are so talented! And so nice to spend time making up that poem.
Op, I would use it in a minute. If you’d like you can add a personal line at the end.

SuperWify

Tue, Mar 27 2018, 11:44 pm

thunderstorm wrote:

Wow! This made me cry.

amother

Taupe

Wed, Mar 28 2018, 12:08 am

Wow thunderstorm ! You made me cry! So touching. It does sound like I would write this. I actually have written something myself. But this goes so far. I'm conflicted what I should give her.
I love what you wrote. Oh my this is hard decision for me.

amother

Crimson

Wed, Mar 28 2018, 3:30 am

"Dearest DD

I saw this beautiful poem that expresses EXACTLY how I feel about you. I only wish I had written it myself...."

(Conflict resolved. You're welcome Cool

)

Ruchel

Wed, Mar 28 2018, 9:03 am

Please TELL HER. Don't make a poem, don't have someone from the internet address your dd

amother

Taupe

Wed, Mar 28 2018, 11:32 pm

Thunderstorm. I really can't pm you I hope your gonna read this.

I can't thank you enough. Your a true talented person. And a truly specially nice person. To come up with something so nice and heartfelt and warm and meaningful in such a short time is amazing. Especially so close to pesach

Consider yourself a very special nice and talented person who has a great heart for peop,e. And a tremendous Baal chessed. This poem/letter means so much to me. Every word is expressed exactly what comes from my heart.

Thank you so so much. Have a very nice and joyful you tov. You can show your dh what I think of you.hopefully he appreciates your talent.

amother

Taupe

Sun, Dec 27 2020, 8:48 am

op, I came back here to read this again. as I remembered this poem you wrote just a little while ago. so well written. is it possible for you to write a small thank you note to parents for a gift I got in the playgroup I work in?

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