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Thu, Jan 23 2020, 4:53 pm
Time sensitive!! My sis wedding in a few days. we plan on doing a flash mob dance with all immediate female members of the family dancing with a rose that we plan on presenting to my mom after the dance. What can I write to go along with it? Something to the effect of gathering her roses all if us unique blah blah special bouquet planted with love. Values unstilled in us... individual blooms on individual paths. Help! I have a blockage. Can anybody help me formulate a few lines. Poem form or other.. thanks in advance!
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avrahamama
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Thu, Jan 23 2020, 5:00 pm
It sounds like you already know what you're saying. What a sweet idea.
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amother
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Thu, Jan 23 2020, 6:30 pm
Any writers there that can help out??? I literally cant think straight!!!
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amother
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Thu, Jan 23 2020, 6:34 pm
when the youngest gets married their is a mezeeka dance or something like that
may be a broom is involved
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amother
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Thu, Jan 23 2020, 6:55 pm
Maybe someone has a few lines ready from a similar occasion or when they presented flowers to their parents with a motif about blossoming or the like that I could plagiarize for myself 😉
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avrahamama
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Thu, Jan 23 2020, 7:01 pm
In your heart there was always room
To watch your seedlings grow then bloom
Into women who build bait ne'man
Who's neshamot give warmth like the sun
And the years were short
Baruch Hashem you made many a vort
Enjoy these roses
Take in their smell
You've raised bnot yisrael
(Don't love the word smell ... But it works)
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amother
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Thu, Jan 23 2020, 9:50 pm
Thanks! Definitely something to start with!
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