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They Came in Joy



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imasinger




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, May 02 2021, 9:33 pm
They came in to sing, they came to join
And most of all, to pray
To celebrate in unity
On this auspicious day.

They came with inspiration
To bonfires burning bright
With purest of intentions
To share the holy light.

And then, disaster -- and this time
Will never be the same.
And yet, there were no terrorists
Nobody else to blame.

But blame is what we must avoid
And search instead within
For how we each can turn the loss
Towards what we must begin.

Why this happened here and now
Is something we can't know.
We cry, we mourn, yet we must say
It's asher bidvaro.

Hashem, please gather all our tears
So precious in Your sight
As kindling in the heavens for
A bonfire of Your light.

And let us know that we can't know
All we can do is care
And try to make this world we're in
A place where all can share.

Help us to join, in love, in song
And most of all, to pray
For in devastation or in joy,
You're with us all the way.
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professor




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, May 02 2021, 10:03 pm
Crying This is so beautiful! Crying Crying Crying
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amother
Coffee


 

Post Sun, May 02 2021, 11:51 pm
This is exquisite.

Would you consider submitting somewhere for publication?

It’s so moving.

Thank you for sharing this.
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MitzadSheini




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, May 02 2021, 11:53 pm
Well written imasinger!
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amother
Azure


 

Post Mon, May 03 2021, 12:18 am
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imasinger




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, May 03 2021, 7:01 am
Thank you to all for your kind words. If there would possibly be publication interest, I'd submit it, but don't know who or where, pm me if you have ideas.

Amother Azure, thank you for sharing your beautiful poem on this thread, too. I think it deserves its own, just for you. So many of us are trying to express these powerful feelings, and all of our words can make a difference.
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Cheshire cat




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, May 03 2021, 8:43 am
Its absolutely beautiful.

The idea- and the writing- really resonated
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amother
Azure


 

Post Mon, May 03 2021, 8:45 am
imasinger wrote:
Thank you to all for your kind words. If there would possibly be publication interest, I'd submit it, but don't know who or where, pm me if you have ideas.

Amother Azure, thank you for sharing your beautiful poem on this thread, too. I think it deserves its own, just for you. So many of us are trying to express these powerful feelings, and all of our words can make a difference.


Sorry.
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imasinger




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, May 03 2021, 8:47 am
Oh my goodness, Azure,I wasn't saying anything critical! I hope you'll put up your lovely poem so it can get the attention it deserves!
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amother
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Post Mon, May 03 2021, 8:48 am
imasinger wrote:
Oh my goodness, Azure,I wasn't saying anything critical! I hope you'll put up your lovely poem so it can get the attention it deserves!


I know that. Still I shouldn't have posted it on your page. 😘
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Chayalle




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, May 03 2021, 9:12 am
This is so beautifully written. Thank you imasinger.
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