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Help me write a nice bas mitzvah poem for dds album



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amother
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Post Tue, Dec 07 2021, 12:37 am
I wanna gift her a nice album with pictures of herself growing up. Please can u help me with a poem for the front page? Am so not good at these stuff
TIA
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amother
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Post Tue, Dec 07 2021, 1:44 am
You don't need a poem. Just write how much you've loved watching her grow up, and how much you're looking forward to more wonderful moments. Real emotions, expressed in simple prose, are far more meaningful than an artificial poem.
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amother
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Post Tue, Dec 07 2021, 2:16 am
I agree with Amother Hunter, but if you have your heart set on a poem, I don't mind trying to help.

One of the things I have done for my kids is write an acrostic - meaning start each line with a letter from their name. I.e. for Leah:

L - Let's take a walk together down memory lane
E - Entranced by your sweet newborn smile and chein.
A - And through all the years, with your smile so wide
H - How you've grown as a Bas Yisroel I look at with pride.
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amother
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Post Tue, Dec 07 2021, 7:03 am
amother [ Vanilla ] wrote:
I agree with Amother Hunter, but if you have your heart set on a poem, I don't mind trying to help.

One of the things I have done for my kids is write an acrostic - meaning start each line with a letter from their name. I.e. for Leah:

L - Let's take a walk together down memory lane
E - Entranced by your sweet newborn smile and chein.
A - And through all the years, with your smile so wide
H - How you've grown as a Bas Yisroel I look at with pride.


I agree with u as well, but the nice few words I will write her on a card. I do feel that a book comes with a poem and I LOVE urs!!
My girlies name is Ruchy. Can u try helping me?
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amother
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Post Wed, Dec 08 2021, 12:56 am
R - Rewind through the years, let the pages unfurl
U - Uplifting memories of a sweet precious girl.
C - Come look at each picture, and see as you grow
H - How you've become the lovely young woman we know.
Y - Years may pass, but one thing will always be true:
You are so loved and we're so proud of you.
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amother
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Post Wed, Dec 08 2021, 12:58 am
amother [ Vanilla ] wrote:
R - Rewind through the years, let the pages unfurl
U - Uplifting memories of a sweet precious girl.
C - Come look at each picture, and see as you grow
H - How you've become the lovely young woman we know.
Y - Years may pass, but one thing will always be true:
You are so loved and we're so proud of you.


Wow wow!! Ur unbelievably talented and kind!! I love it! I just got so emotional reading it!!
Thank u thank u!!!
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amother
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Post Thu, Nov 03 2022, 9:59 pm
For my daughter's name also! Etty
Thanks
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imasinger




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Nov 03 2022, 10:20 pm
How's this?

E - Each of these moments we see here can show
T - The smiles and the love we've shared as you grow.
T - This wonderful day, we thank Hashem above
Y - You're a special young lady that all of us love.
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amother
RosePink


 

Post Fri, Nov 04 2022, 12:01 am
Awesome
Thank you so much 💓
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MiniMom




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Nov 13 2022, 10:37 pm
I love these poems! Can I add my daughter "hindy" as well? That's so nice of u!!
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amother
Lime


 

Post Sun, Nov 13 2022, 11:19 pm
Wow you're amazing! Love these!!!!
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cyber1gost




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Feb 21 2024, 8:39 am
Would you be able to do something like this with the name Racheli?
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amother
Chicory


 

Post Wed, Feb 21 2024, 9:36 am
Can you do the name Yael please? Thank you!
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voira




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Feb 21 2024, 9:59 am
Would love to do a general poem, walking down memory lane, and remembering all the fun memories. Can someone start me off and then I can add...
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