I'm Damsel in Distress - AMA

Aurora

Sun, Jan 02 2022, 3:35 pm

Why was the girl cooking for all the bachurim? Why didn't any of them step into the kitchen to help?

amother

Lavender

Sun, Jan 02 2022, 3:35 pm

I’m a super critical reader and I’m absolutely loving this story. I also don’t get the chocolate spread reference…

amother

Firethorn

Sun, Jan 02 2022, 4:05 pm

would love to read a bit more explicit intimate moments between eli and chava Wink

amother

Sun, Jan 02 2022, 4:15 pm

Sunsong wrote:

Why was the girl cooking for all the bachurim? Why didn't any of them step into the kitchen to help?

Addressed in the thread when it was first posted, don't worry everyone else was up in arms too!

It's more Chava's personality to want to just keep herself busy and useful and not have to interact with the bochurim more than necessary. She didn't want them in the kitchen much.

amother

Sun, Jan 02 2022, 4:18 pm

amother [ Lavender ] wrote:

I’m a super critical reader and I’m absolutely loving this story. I also don’t get the chocolate spread reference…

It has to do with a signal prearranged with the Cohens. IY"H it will be re-explained in the next piece.

married

Sun, Jan 02 2022, 5:18 pm

I did get the chocolate spread reference,
They had arranged with rebbetzin that of they order a white spread and another spread (forgot which one) its a sign that they need help.
Can't wait for the next part!

shanarishona

Sun, Jan 02 2022, 5:48 pm

I am loving your story! You are so talented!

amother

Lavender

Sun, Jan 02 2022, 6:25 pm

amother [ Firethorn ] wrote:

would love to read a bit more explicit intimate moments between eli and chava Wink

Same lol

amother

Azure

Sun, Jan 02 2022, 6:26 pm

And I love that there is not.

Enjoying your writing so much!

Much continued hatzlocha!

amother

Pearl

Wed, Dec 28 2022, 12:36 am

Sorry to bring up this old thread, but I keep checking if you have another installment, lol!

Just know that we’re waiting and would love the next part!

amother

Wed, Dec 28 2022, 12:54 am

amother Pearl wrote:

Sorry to bring up this old thread, but I keep checking if you have another installment, lol!

Just know that we’re waiting and would love the next part!

Hopefully will get to it one of these days! I do have the rest of the story blocked out until the happy ending (though I never figure out the details until I actually write it). Wish it didn't have to sink so low on the priority list, I do enjoy writing!

Winterb

Wed, Dec 28 2022, 8:14 am

Just wanna chime in to say I also can’t wait for the next chapter. I loved this story from the beginning and can’t wait to see where it goes next.

amother

Fern

Thu, Dec 29 2022, 7:58 pm

OP you are amazing! I’m loving your story! I actually reread the entire thing a couple of times 🫣
Can’t wait for the next chapter

amother

Fern

Thu, Feb 02 2023, 7:25 pm

Just bumping up this thread to say I absolutely love this story and I’m waiting anxiously for the next installment

amother

Razzmatazz

Thu, Feb 02 2023, 7:37 pm

amother Fern wrote:

Just bumping up this thread to say I absolutely love this story and I’m waiting anxiously for the next installment

Lol maybe this should be the designated thread for these type of comments instead of getting everyone’s hopes up on the story thread

amother

Fern

Thu, Feb 02 2023, 7:44 pm

amother Razzmatazz wrote:

Lol maybe this should be the designated thread for these type of comments instead of getting everyone’s hopes up on the story thread

lol yes that’s exactly why I posted here