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ShaindyShushan
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Thu, Jan 27 2022, 12:09 am
Anyone up for reading and commenting on a story draft -- 5382 words?
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ShaindyShushan
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Thu, Jan 27 2022, 1:59 am
I'm PM-ing those who express willingness. Many, many thanks.
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bgr8ful
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Thu, Jan 27 2022, 3:58 am
I can too if you still want another opinion.
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bisbettertheni
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Thu, Jan 27 2022, 4:16 am
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cnc
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Thu, Jan 27 2022, 9:29 am
I can if you’re still looking
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chili-n-cholent
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Thu, Jan 27 2022, 10:32 am
cnc wrote: | I can if you’re still looking |
Same! (but probably just so I can feel part of things cuz I love reading (and editing), I can't imagine you need me anymore...
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b.chadash
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Thu, Jan 27 2022, 11:17 am
OP can you please tell us what type of feedback you are looking for? Also, do you plan to submit this to one of the magazines?
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ShaindyShushan
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Thu, Jan 27 2022, 10:47 pm
b.chadash wrote: | OP can you please tell us what type of feedback you are looking for? Also, do you plan to submit this to one of the magazines? |
Basically, I would like to know if the story holds the reader's interest and if it "works," is coherent. Are there parts that are confusing, boring, seem to drag?
I wrote the story with the frum magazines in mind, but I'm not sure the final product (at least as of now) is a good fit for them, so any input on that would be appreciated as well.
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DustyDiamonds
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Wed, Feb 16 2022, 8:54 am
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Rugelech
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Wed, Feb 16 2022, 8:57 am
Yes. I would be happy to.
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