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ShaindyShushan




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 12:09 am
Anyone up for reading and commenting on a story draft -- 5382 words?
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b.chadash




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 12:18 am
Yes.
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dena613




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 1:04 am
Me Smile
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ShaindyShushan




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 1:59 am
I'm PM-ing those who express willingness. Many, many thanks.
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bgr8ful




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 3:58 am
I can too if you still want another opinion.
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bisbettertheni




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 4:16 am
Me too
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English3




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 6:06 am
Me
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imasinger




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 6:51 am
Me
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teachkids




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 7:10 am
Sure
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SG18




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 7:17 am
Yes!
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DesignIt




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 8:59 am
yes
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cnc




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 9:29 am
I can if you’re still looking
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chili-n-cholent




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 10:32 am
cnc wrote:
I can if you’re still looking

Same! (but probably just so I can feel part of things cuz I love reading (and editing), I can't imagine you need me anymore...
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b.chadash




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 11:17 am
OP can you please tell us what type of feedback you are looking for? Also, do you plan to submit this to one of the magazines?
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ShaindyShushan




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jan 27 2022, 10:47 pm
b.chadash wrote:
OP can you please tell us what type of feedback you are looking for? Also, do you plan to submit this to one of the magazines?


Basically, I would like to know if the story holds the reader's interest and if it "works," is coherent. Are there parts that are confusing, boring, seem to drag?
I wrote the story with the frum magazines in mind, but I'm not sure the final product (at least as of now) is a good fit for them, so any input on that would be appreciated as well.
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PinkFridge




 
 
    
 

Post Fri, Jan 28 2022, 10:20 am
Me too.
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skyeblue




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Feb 16 2022, 12:25 am
I would be willing
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a2z




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Feb 16 2022, 1:46 am
Me too
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DustyDiamonds




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Feb 16 2022, 8:54 am
I’d love to!
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Rugelech




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Feb 16 2022, 8:57 am
Yes. I would be happy to.
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