Poem help needed! | Imamother

Log in / Sign Up

List of Forums + New Post Recipe Box Usergroups Following My Posts Bookmarks

Private Messages Advanced Search Rules New User Guide FAQ Advertise Contact Us

Forum -> Hobbies, Crafts, and Collections -> The Imamother Writing Club

Poem help needed!

View latest: 24h 48h 72h

Sat, Dec 24 2022, 11:11 pm

Hi,
For a chanukah family game, I need to write a poem describing a family of 5 - 3 boys and 2 girls. Mother is a 2nd grade Morah and father teaches. Oldest is a teenager and the names include Moishy, and Leah..
Can someone please help start me off with a few lines?!

amother

Heather

Sat, Dec 24 2022, 11:16 pm

There once was a family of 5
The happiest family alive
Mom was a Morah
Teaching second graders Torah
And helping her family thrive...

Not sure if this is what you're going for

Sat, Dec 24 2022, 11:24 pm

Thank you so much!! It is supposed to be directed to the family - I'm gifting the family a present that all those at the party need to figure out from clues given in the poem.
I'm so bad at these things so really appreciate your help!!

imasinger

Sat, Dec 24 2022, 11:37 pm

I'm happy to help, but you'll need to give full details. You can post or pm.

Sat, Dec 24 2022, 11:50 pm

Sure, what details are you looking for?
A family of 5 that lives in lakewood in westgate. Names Moshy and Leah - they have a mesivta bochur and sienna.. anything else?!

imasinger

Sun, Dec 25 2022, 12:06 am

Yeah, what's the present?

dena613

Sun, Dec 25 2022, 12:15 am

In a place with a shaar, but not meah she'aRIM
Lives a lovely mishpacha and they're very frim
Kekochvei hashamayim the parents are
Instilling ahavas hatorah, each is a superstar

They drive the most ubiquitous minivan there can be
In Lakewood Township, and it's not the Odyssey

Last edited by dena613 on Sun, Dec 25 2022, 12:18 am; edited 1 time in total

dena613

Sun, Dec 25 2022, 12:16 am

Lol, all the imas in lkwd with second grade girls or those who live inWestgate are trying to figure this out

dena613

Sun, Dec 25 2022, 12:22 am

dena613 wrote:

5 wonderful kids, some daughters, some sons,
And their family is one of our favorite ones!!!

Are these enough clues? No? Can't you see
I'm describing the XYZ family!!😀

imasinger

Sun, Dec 25 2022, 12:35 am

Think over the clues, and I do believe it --
You'll guess what's the gift, also who will receive it.

A family with more fraternity than sorority
A family where teaching is a high priority.

A family whose kids love to think and to wonder;
A family whose kids are mesivta and under.

A family with one kid named same as ___ rabbeinu
And another whose name comes from our imeinu.

Who put a menorah on their door as a symbol
Who daven at shul with a rav who's a Zimbal...

Page 1 of 1