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Lefty
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 Fri, Dec 04 2009, 11:48 am
My husband's good customer Daniel is getting married soon.
He wants to impress him with a nice wedding poem.
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Something that fills these lines. I would do it for him but it's SOOO hard for me. My english isn't perfect and I'm sooo bad in poems....
Maybe for some of you it's nothing?!?!
I reallly appreciate it if you try!
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louche
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Fri, Dec 04 2009, 1:18 pm
Any such offering would be meaningless without knowing the guy. If you would tell people something about him they could try to come up with something, but the truth is, better a simple and sincere prose statement from someone who knows him than a work of art from someone who doesn't. The difference is SOUL. When you know the person, your offering is sincere and has soul; when you don't, you may as well buy Hallmark (the best-known greeting-card company in the US.)
BTW 'twould be a lot nicer if the "poem" included the kallah's name, don't you think? After all, it's not just about Daniel--it's about Daniel joining forces with Whatsername. That IS the point of a wedding, is it not?
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fmt4
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Fri, Dec 04 2009, 2:14 pm
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No offense, but I don't think filling in the letters of Daniel with adjectives is going to impress much.
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Lefty
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Fri, Dec 04 2009, 2:31 pm
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I think I'm on ur side with this! That's what hubby initially wanted. I'll talk to him about it. Thanx
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Ruchel
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Sat, Dec 05 2009, 1:42 pm
I think a girl could find it cute but a guy will just 
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