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Post  Wed, Oct 11 2017, 6:21 am
You asked for it. I dont remember which users asked me to post poetry under my username a few weeks ago... But here I go

I just want to be free
Let me take in what I cannot see
Imagination is the problem
And the solution
But I can't solve em

I'm drowning in confusion
So Ive got a grainy resolution
on my eyes
You're to smart to die

say a one, a two, and a three
I don't want to be this, I just want to be me
Clawing at the darkness
It told me it made me see

Say a one two three
C'mon say cheese
A sarcastic remark
I've got better dreams

Don't beleive the scam
This is not who I am

Shackled chains, broken keys
You know it's all up to my knees
and I've got a few choice words I'd say
It's hard to rain on your parade

Nothing will suffice, just to breathe
You know it all ain't nothing to me
and I've got a few mistakes I've made
and I've got battle scars that won't fade

Say a one, a two, and three
I dont want to be this, I just want to be me
Don't believe the scam
This isn't who I am

If you look to my scars you'll see
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LovesHashem









  


Post  Today at 4:54 pm
I decided to change the title of this thread, because I write poetry often, and also I like having my stuff in one place. If ever want to use something for other writing or a project, I know where to delete it from. In any case, I think the first poem was posted during a 3 day yuntiv, so not many people saw it. Here's another poem:

Leave me be in a dark room
So I can see, so I can breathe
When it's only me and you
and control is quite useless
long gone tools
with faded rules

Once did I see
meadows and valleys
All turned to dusk
by the sharp breeze
and the day is quite young
and the moon is quite wistful
Where have I gone?
Oh where have I gone?

Running from that which lies in my heart
tackled the end before I did the start
and you tell me I shine bright like a star
If so, where is my light?
Why can't I see it?

Leave me be, in a deep forest
So I can hear
So I can live
When it's only me and you
and control is quite useless
I ask, where is my light?
Why can't I see it?
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