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amother
Goldenrod
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Sun, Nov 11 2018, 4:15 pm
Messenger Service
Local and Long Distance
Professional and Discreet
718-111-1111
Anything else I should include in the ad?
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amother
Seafoam
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Sun, Nov 11 2018, 4:19 pm
Quick and efficient?
Same delivery? (If you will do that)
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ssspectacular
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Sun, Nov 11 2018, 4:23 pm
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simcha2
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Sun, Nov 11 2018, 4:23 pm
Is there anything that sets you apart from other services? Speed, size constraints, personal interactions?
It helps to differentiate yourself.
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ra_mom
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Sun, Nov 11 2018, 4:29 pm
Reliable trusted courier services
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amother
Goldenrod
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Sun, Nov 11 2018, 4:30 pm
simcha2 wrote: | Is there anything that sets you apart from other services? Speed, size constraints, personal interactions?
It helps to differentiate yourself. |
Good questions. I'll ask those who use such service what they dislike with the current service, and aim to improve on those aspects.
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amother
Goldenrod
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Sun, Nov 11 2018, 4:34 pm
ra_mom wrote: | Reliable trusted courier services |
Powow!
Thanks!
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amother
Seafoam
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Sun, Nov 11 2018, 4:41 pm
amother wrote: | Good questions. I'll ask those who use such service what they dislike with the current service, and aim to improve on those aspects. |
Great advice..
I think these questions should be the basis of your business model, not just the ad..
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ellacoe
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Sun, Nov 11 2018, 6:22 pm
Are you insured ? You might want to include that
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amother
Goldenrod
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Sun, Nov 11 2018, 6:45 pm
ellacoe wrote: | Are you insured ? You might want to include that |
Insurance for what? If a package gets lost? Damaged? How would I know whether the damage happened before it was handed over to me?
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ellacoe
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Sun, Nov 11 2018, 7:41 pm
amother wrote: | Insurance for what? If a package gets lost? Damaged? How would I know whether the damage happened before it was handed over to me? |
Yes insurance in case the package gets lost or damaged while in your care
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amother
Goldenrod
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Mon, Nov 12 2018, 2:00 am
ellacoe wrote: | Yes insurance in case the package gets lost or damaged while in your care |
I would definitely pay for a replacement.
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imasoftov
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Mon, Nov 12 2018, 5:05 am
amother wrote: | I would definitely pay for a replacement. |
No matter how much it was worth? I recommend that you figure this out before you open for business, or if you're already started, before you make promises that have the potential to bankrupt you.
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amother
Goldenrod
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Mon, Nov 12 2018, 3:25 pm
imasoftov wrote: | No matter how much it was worth? I recommend that you figure this out before you open for business, or if you're already started, before you make promises that have the potential to bankrupt you. |
Good advice. Thanks :-)
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amother
Magenta
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Mon, Nov 12 2018, 4:18 pm
amother wrote: | Messenger Service
Local and Long Distance
Professional and Discreet
718-111-1111
Anything else I should include in the ad? |
Discreet? What are you delivering?
Reading this ad makes me think you are doing something nefarious.
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amother
Goldenrod
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Mon, Nov 12 2018, 5:12 pm
amother wrote: | Discreet? What are you delivering?
Reading this ad makes me think you are doing something nefarious. |
Discreet because I have a reputation for being confidential.
Maybe replace ''discreet'' with ''confidential''?
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