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Bitachon101
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Sun, Nov 16 2014, 9:25 pm
I noticed that even when I mean to make a short point my posts are often long.
Ouch.
Hope long and boring aren't synonymous but I'd love feedback
Are my posts like totally way too long?
Should I try to say them in less words or we're cool with the shpiel?
I don't wanna bore anyone to death.
It just dawned on me. Now don't rip me apart here.... Just some constructive feedback
Tia
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Kiwi13
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Sun, Nov 16 2014, 9:30 pm
That happens to me too sometimes!
What I do when I am trying to be concise is write out the whole Megillah and then edit it down. Other times I don't care so much and just leave it long...
Happy editing!
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pickle321
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Sun, Nov 16 2014, 9:55 pm
Bitachon101 wrote: | I noticed that even when I mean to make a short point my posts are often long.
Ouch.
Hope long and boring aren't synonymous but I'd love feedback
Are my posts like totally way too long?
Should I try to say them in less words or we're cool with the shpiel?
I don't wanna bore anyone to death.
It just dawned on me. Now don't rip me apart here.... Just some constructive feedback
Tia |
I don't know what your usual posts are like. But I personally do not have patience for reading long posts I just don't read them. Sometimes I'll skim it skipping half of it. Which is what I just did with your op. It was a very long way of asking a simple question. But that just may be me and my short attention span.
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pickle321
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Sun, Nov 16 2014, 9:56 pm
pickle321 wrote: | I don't know what your usual posts are like. But I personally do not have patience for reading long posts I just don't read them. Sometimes I'll skim it skipping half of it. Which is what I just did with your op. It was a very long way of asking a simple question. But that just may be me and my short attention span. |
Then again some of my posts are long too. It just happens, there's not much you can do about it.
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chani8
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Sun, Nov 16 2014, 11:34 pm
IMO, try to separate into paragraphs, because it makes speed reading easier.
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seeker
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Sun, Nov 16 2014, 11:52 pm
I do that too. I intend to be more brief but I end up shmoozing on and on... Oh well. If you don't like it, don't read. I'll know who my friends are
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freidasima
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Mon, Nov 17 2014, 12:39 am
Its generational and punctuational. And of course dependent on whether one has attention span deficiencies.
I write long. If someone doesnt want to read it, that fine. Its a free country. Your posts are just fine!
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vicki
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Mon, Nov 17 2014, 12:53 am
I'm not saying your posts are long, but I do like long posts. As long as it's written in a comprehensive and clear manner. I feel like I get more of a background story.
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Bitachon101
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Mon, Nov 17 2014, 8:08 pm
Thanks for the feedback.
Chani8 Ill try to separate paragraphs more.
Pickle... I see, and I totally get the short attn span cuz I often dont have patience to read the long ones. but when I type.... my soul just flows out if ya know what I mean.
When I talk - im not like that. just with pen, paper or keyboard!
I just feel like I get it all out clearly that way.
but I dont want to be the poster that is so boring cuz its all so long and so not fun to read!
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zaq
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Mon, Nov 17 2014, 8:48 pm
chani8 wrote: | IMO, try to separate into paragraphs, because it makes speed reading easier. |
It makes ANY reading easier. Sorry, Bitachon, I have no prejudice against long posts, being rather verbose myself, but I WILL "walk on by" posts that are a solid block of text with no white space. You don't have to write a perfect paragraph following the rules of Elements of Style, but you do have to allow the reader's eye a place to rest. No matter that your heart is overflowing and the words are gushing out of you, hitting "return" "return"every so often is not going to put much of a crimp in your style. It IS going to make it more likely that people like me will take the time to read you.
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youngishbear
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Mon, Nov 17 2014, 9:00 pm
I try the editing down method, but I find myself adding new nuggets of inspiration...
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