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Poem needed for Ballerina Theme--DESPERATE!
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Lizzie4




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Feb 25 2015, 6:24 am
tillyost wrote:
Thanks Lizzy. U are so special for taking your time and writing this. U appreciate it


It's no problem, really Smile I don't get to write for my job so I like helping people when I can
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Lizzie4




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Feb 25 2015, 6:25 am
myself wrote:
Lizzie, just had to comment on your amazing talent! It's kind of you to share it.


Thanks! That is so sweet! Smile
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fantabulous1




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Feb 25 2015, 9:33 am
Lizzie4, OP here...You've got talent! Smile Your poems are great! I typed up your poem to use and put on my mm, but it doesn't fit on the label I had in mind to use....do you think you can come up with a shorter poem? (3-4 lines) Using words like 'dance', 'spin', ballerina type of words.....I don't mind if the Purim story is not tied into it. it's o.k. TIA!
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Lizzie4




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Feb 25 2015, 10:46 am
fantabulous1 wrote:
Lizzie4, OP here...You've got talent! Smile Your poems are great! I typed up your poem to use and put on my mm, but it doesn't fit on the label I had in mind to use....do you think you can come up with a shorter poem? (3-4 lines) Using words like 'dance', 'spin', ballerina type of words.....I don't mind if the Purim story is not tied into it. it's o.k. TIA!


Twirling and spinning in a sweet graceful dance
Please join us in our happy ballerina Purim Prance!
Happy Purim- from the ____ family
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sorah0613




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Feb 25 2015, 9:32 pm
When I dance I'm filled with love
I'm filled with love from up above.
I feel Hashem in every move and
I know with each step this Eishes Chayil
brings everyone a great big smile.

by Sorah Weiss

Purim with it's masquerade
makes me want to twirl.
I fly, I leap. I've got to smile.
Like Esther, I'm an Eishes Chayil.

also... by Sorah Weiss
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fantabulous1




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Feb 26 2015, 10:36 am
Lizzie4--Thanks a mill! Its great! Smile
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fantabulous1




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Feb 26 2015, 10:37 am
sorah0613--great poem! Thank you Smile
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tillyost




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Feb 26 2015, 3:54 pm
Lizzie anything shorter for me as well?
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Lastdime




 
 
    
 

Post Sat, Feb 28 2015, 12:24 pm
The music is pounding The dancing is clear
The ballerina is stretching and her dance we revere
The timing is perfect as she turns our way
The perforce is stunning as she swings and she sways
But wait in the middle. She runs from the stage
She runs to the back and it’s all the rage
The symphony stops in shock as they see
the ballerina is running, it just can’t be
BUT yes,looking closer A basket in her hands
she decided to leave the stage and grand stands
She is delivering treats on Purim day
a mitzvah she says is to give away
The audience is shocked, and all stand and cheer
Never before has someone done that this year
To stop in the middle while the crew waits,
to share food with someone, the crowd escalates
She bows and curtsies her mitzvah is done
Back to the stage for another one
Its hard to believe our ballerina has come, right from the show to offer you one
Eat and enjoy The basket you get
she just may get fired, but there no regret
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