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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 5:12 pm
Wait—that song sounded strangely unforgettable! And that girl! She knew her—one way or another, but how?!
elf--you are GOOD at spotting these things! Wow! Well, I triple checked all mine and I'm pretty sure there's no wronge letters...I hope! Good job, you'd be an awesome proofreader
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elf123
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 5:13 pm
Atali wrote: | Oops,
I tried to avoid the letters but didn't do the worlds greatest job.
Let's change "ocean" to "sea" and "lock" to "lid" |
Sorry to nitpick, but now it's "....a broken lid on the lid?"
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crush
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 5:13 pm
Shopmiami49 wrote: | But she realized that she first had to give a tenth of the treasure to tzadakah. |
Lol that made me laugh
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crush
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 5:14 pm
elf123 wrote: | Atali wrote: | Oops,
I tried to avoid the letters but didn't do the worlds greatest job.
Let's change "ocean" to "sea" and "lock" to "lid" |
Sorry to nitpick, but now it's "....a broken lid on the lid?" |
how about "a brokwn dead bolt on the lid?" lol does that make sense at all?
Last edited by crush on Sun, Jul 18 2010, 5:15 pm; edited 1 time in total
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elf123
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 5:15 pm
crush wrote: | Wait—that song sounded strangely unforgettable! And that girl! She knew her—one way or another, but how?!
elf--you are GOOD at spotting these things! Wow! Well, I triple checked all mine and I'm pretty sure there's no wronge letters...I hope! Good job, you'd be an awesome proofreader |
Why, thank you, kind sir.... (Guess what I do professionally? Oh, wait, you already did!)
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crush
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 5:16 pm
elf123 wrote: | crush wrote: | Wait—that song sounded strangely unforgettable! And that girl! She knew her—one way or another, but how?!
elf--you are GOOD at spotting these things! Wow! Well, I triple checked all mine and I'm pretty sure there's no wronge letters...I hope! Good job, you'd be an awesome proofreader |
Why, thank you, kind sir.... (Guess what I do professionally? Oh, wait, you already did!) |
No way! Really?! That's so cool and now I'm emabarressed, cuz I noticed I spelled wrong "wronge" by mistake, and you for sure noticed that!
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yummydd
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 6:09 pm
Happy you guys are keeping yourself entertained....
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marina
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 6:32 pm
Then arrived a great big alligator and ate laylay. How sad.
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yummy2
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 6:33 pm
What a party pooper. How sad
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marina
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 6:42 pm
cleanlinen wrote: | What a party pooper. How sad |
don't use P, that's part of the game.
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sequoia
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 6:45 pm
We assumed the game was over, unless laylay is gonna pull a little red riding hood.
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mazeltov
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 6:50 pm
elf123 wrote: | Atali wrote: | It was a small treasure box with a broken lock on the lid. |
Sorry, that third bold letter looks suspiciously like a "c" to me! |
with all the proofreading, how did nobody notice the "m" in small?
that's before the c in lock.
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crush
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 6:53 pm
marina wrote: | Then arrived a great big alligator and ate laylay. How sad. |
Well, then the alligator gently took Laylay out of his throat! Yay! And Laylay started to look for her treasure again.
I like this game! I don't want it to end, it's such fun
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mazeltov
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 6:53 pm
cleanlinen wrote: | As she got more near, thats when she saw it |
and the "m" in more?
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marina
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 6:54 pm
OY, IT IS NEVER OVER, THERE IS ALWAYS ANOTHER WAY!
Laylay davened to the Aibishter who suggested to the alligator that he throw her out on the land of Ninveh.
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crush
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 6:58 pm
Lol, Marina, you make me laugh. But I'm continuing it, yay!
Then Laylay saw Yonah! “Oh, Yonah, tell this girl, if you will, the laws of the land”, she begged.
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mindyme
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 7:02 pm
"Firstly, dry yourself. Here's a towel."
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crush
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 7:16 pm
So Laylay dried herself, wringing her hair so hard that a few strands of hair tore out.
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mindyme
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Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:30 pm
A bird grabbed the floating hairs to add to her nest, high in a tree.
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