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amother


 

Post Wed, Oct 16 2013, 2:28 pm
Can you please help me write a "thank you for your purchase" card. I work for a big company that sells frum women's items and need help for the wording that comes in the card in the box. And to offer a 10% off. I need it be cute and sophisticated. Hellllpppp thanks.
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amother


 

Post Wed, Oct 16 2013, 9:12 pm
Anyoooooooooooooooone
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chicco




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Oct 16 2013, 9:25 pm
Being that I don't know what you have sold... this is the best I've got:

Dear Customer,
In appreciation for your purchase, we at (Company name) would like to offer you a 10% discount (on whatever). It is because of customers like you that we feel like we are doing the world a service/ are contributing to society/ are so rich/ have a good customer rating/ are able to make it/ (blah blah blah) ... We look forward to doing more business with you in the future/ seeing you in the store soon/ trading goods for money/ ripping you off....

Whatever suits your needs.
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chicco




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Oct 16 2013, 9:26 pm
maybe for the coupon part it should be "we are pleased to offer you"
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