Need Help with Business Email

yiddishmom

Wed, Sep 16 2020, 9:56 pm

Hi all,

I couldn't decide if I should post in this forum or "Working Women", but here I am.

I am terrible at English writing. I am trying to write up an email with a pricing proposal to manage a real estate agent's Instagram Account and WhatsApp Statuses.

It's someone that I am very friendly with so it doesn't have to be super professional, but it does have to be decent.

Below is what I have typed up. Can you help me brush it up and make it sound more cohesive?

Quote:

Below please find my proposal for managing your Instagram account and WhatsApp Statuses.

As I mentioned to you, we will review and possibly modify the pricing and pricing model in a few months when I have a better understanding of what the job entails.

- $16 per post
- Minimum of 4 posts per week
- Each active listing will have at least two posts per month

$5 per WhatsApp Status design.

WhatsApp Statuses will be either:
1. A resized Instagram post
2. A link to other agents' listing with a short caption and/ or one picture.

You mentioned that you also wants short animation videos on your status. Since I have not done animation video in the past, I will offer the first few for no charge. Once I learn how to do them then I will decide on a price (probably after the fifth video animation).

Thank you.

Thank you very much!

amother

Pumpkin

Wed, Sep 16 2020, 10:22 pm

The email looks fine.

I know that's not what you're asking but I have a friend who does animation videos. It took intense training beyond her graphic design training to learn it. How are you planning to learn this on the job? Unless you mean something else by "animation videos."

yiddishmom

Wed, Sep 16 2020, 10:30 pm

Thank you.

You are right. I'm using the wrong word. I'm not sure if there is an official word for it.

She wants very basic videos (similar to a slide-show kind of thing).

I am almost positive there is an app out there for it.

allthingsblue

Wed, Sep 16 2020, 10:35 pm

yiddishmom wrote:

Gifs?