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amother
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 Fri, Feb 03 2023, 12:51 am
Hi all, I don't know how to write, and can't afford paying a professional copywriter to write a small poem or a short four line letter for the Kalla.
Can anyone help me write up something tied into Tu B'shvat?
I am sending her an evening bag + a Tu Bshvat Platter.
What am I supposed to even write? something tied into family? / roots/ offspring's?
I'm really not familiar as this is my first, and don't have anyone to ask.
Thank in advance!
Iyh simchas by all of you!
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amother
Magenta
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Fri, Feb 03 2023, 12:59 am
| amother OP wrote: | Hi all, I don't know how to write, and can't afford paying a professional copywriter to write a small poem or a short four line letter for the Kalla.
Can anyone help me write up something tied into Tu B'shvat?
I am sending her an evening bag + a Tu Bshvat Platter.
What am I supposed to even write? something tied into family? / roots/ offspring's?
I'm really not familiar as this is my first, and don't have anyone to ask.
Thank in advance!
Iyh simchas by all of you! |
I started a thread about this too but it got derailed with what??ur sending something bla bla so I will be following
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amother
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Fri, Feb 03 2023, 1:17 am
| amother Magenta wrote: | | I started a thread about this too but it got derailed with what??ur sending something bla bla so I will be following |
I don't understand what you are trying to say.
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amother
Fuchsia
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Fri, Feb 03 2023, 1:32 am
Dear Kallah,
"Ki Ha'adam Eitz Hasadeh," to a tree we're compared
As so many qualities are jointly shared.
From your beautiful family you have grown strong roots
And your exemplary middos are bearing great fruits.
These gifts are an expression of the nachas we've grown to see
As you begin a new branch of your family tree.
With love,
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amother
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Fri, Feb 03 2023, 1:47 am
| amother Fuchsia wrote: | Dear Kallah,
"Ki Ha'adam Eitz Hasadeh," to a tree we're compared
As so many qualities are jointly shared.
From your beautiful family you have grown strong roots
And your exemplary middos are bearing great fruits.
These gifts are an expression of the nachas we've grown to see
As you begin a new branch of your family tree.
With love, |
WOW. WOW. WOW.
I'm so overtaken by this!
I honestly did not expect such a beautiful and well written poem. You are very talented Bli Ayin hara!
An hour ago I was so stuck and concerned about this. I don't have the skills to write like that, and as I said, I don't have who to ask for help. An idea popped in to my mind that I should maybe ask for help on Imamother and that maybe one of the fellow Ima's will be kind and generous to help me. Let alone, write something up for me!
I am so thankful to you beyond words!
May the happiness you just brought to me be a Zchus for you and for all of Klal Yisroel!
Thank you!
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amother
OP
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Fri, Feb 03 2023, 2:36 am
| amother Fuchsia wrote: | Dear Kallah,
"Ki Ha'adam Eitz Hasadeh," to a tree we're compared
As so many qualities are jointly shared.
What does the above line mean? Meaning what is it trying to say? what kind of qualities are you referring to? and shared with what? with the Etz?
From your beautiful family you have grown strong roots
And your exemplary middos are bearing great fruits.
These gifts are an expression of the nachas we've grown to see
As you begin a new branch of your family tree.
What do you mean by we've grown to see? We didn't see her grow up. She is engaged to our son. Can you someone explain to me what the expression means?
With love, |
Can anyone answer my questions? I wrote it in the red font.
TY
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amother
Ivory
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Fri, Feb 03 2023, 7:27 am
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It's a poem, not a literature lesson. Use it or don't. She was very gracious to write one for you. Stop analyzing
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amother
Banana
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Fri, Feb 03 2023, 8:25 am
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Serious question OP: you wouldn’t feel disingenuous signing your name to something you didn’t write?
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amother
DarkMagenta
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Fri, Feb 03 2023, 8:33 am
| amother OP wrote: | Can anyone answer my questions? I wrote it in the red font.
TY |
It says ki hadam eitz hasoda. a person shared qualities with a tree.
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amother
Stonewash
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Fri, Feb 03 2023, 8:33 am
| amother Banana wrote: | | Serious question OP: you wouldn’t feel disingenuous signing your name to something you didn’t write? |
Maybe OP can add a line saying that she had a friend write the poem for her.
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amother
DarkMagenta
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Fri, Feb 03 2023, 8:34 am
| amother Ivory wrote: | | It's a poem, not a literature lesson. Use it or don't. She was very gracious to write one for you. Stop analyzing |
Why can't op ask for an explanaition to a line. She wants to understand what it means, not overanalyzing. why are you making her feel bad?
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amother
Maize
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Fri, Feb 03 2023, 9:22 am
| amother Banana wrote: | | Serious question OP: you wouldn’t feel disingenuous signing your name to something you didn’t write? |
Kallah/Chosson gift poems are known to be often purchased, borrowed,or shared
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amother
Banana
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Fri, Feb 03 2023, 9:34 am
[quote="amother Maize"]Kallah/Chosson gift poems are known to be often purchased, borrowed,or shared[/quote
Fascinating
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