Purim poem help | Imamother

amother

Jetblack

Mon, Mar 18 2024, 7:19 pm

In Israel’s land, where blue and white gleam,
Comes a festival of joy, like a vivid dream.
Purim it’s called, with colors so bold,
In the heart of the Holy Land, stories unfold.

From the shores of the Med to the hills so high,
Blue and white banners paint the sky.
In every corner, from city to town,
Israel’s colors, a glorious crown.

In Shushan’s city, where history lies,
Esther’s bravery shines, reaching the skies.
With blue and white costumes, we honor the tale,
Of how faith and courage never fail.

From the Negev’s desert to Galilee’s shore,
Purim’s joy echoes forevermore.
So let’s don our colors, let’s celebrate right,
In Israel’s blue and white, our spirits take flight!

dena613

Mon, Mar 18 2024, 7:20 pm

amother Jetblack wrote:

This sounds like chat gpt

amother

Jetblack

Mon, Mar 18 2024, 7:21 pm

And a slightly more friendly kid’s version:
In Israel’s land, where skies are so blue,
Comes a party so fun, just for me and you!
It’s Purim time, with colors so bright,
Let’s dress up and dance, all through the night!

With blue and white flags, waving up high,
We celebrate Purim, reaching for the sky.
In every city, in every street,
Purim’s magic, oh so sweet!

In Shushan’s town, a queen so brave,
Saved the day, our people she gave.
With costumes and treats, we join the cheer,
Purim in Israel, the best time of year!

From Tel Aviv’s beaches to Jerusalem’s walls,
We sing and we dance, having a ball.
So grab your mask, your cape, your crown,
In Israel’s blue and white, happiness is found!

amother

Jetblack

Mon, Mar 18 2024, 7:22 pm

dena613 wrote:

This sounds like chat gpt

Absolutely!
But I find that if you have the base, you can then customize and make it your own. It’s a lot less work. 🤣🤷🏻‍♀️

salt

Wed, Mar 20 2024, 6:32 am

BoyMom613 wrote:

Anything related to the current matzav?

Replace Jetblack's last 2 lines with:

So grab your mask, and your Purim gear,
Let's hope and pray that the Geula is near!

Lastdime

Wed, Mar 20 2024, 4:39 pm

Since simchas Torah we view the world a new
We started a difficult journey that has our heart feel blue
We won’t whitewash our love for each yid no matter who they are
From innocent child to others living far
We all stand together to support, while things are really tough
It’s a wonder our hearts don’t break, we have seen and heard enough
But behind every story and every newspaper that we see
We remain proud to connect to our people, it’s who we long to be
The blue and white we know, is just like our strong flag
It tells the world that we are tough, with no real need to brag
We pray for our people where ever they may be
We offer asks of hesed to those suffering from an evil decree
Amalek then and now .Think they will have the last word
History is unfolding and colors may seem blurred
But all those who know Hashem will watch over blue and white
And at any moment end this battle, and make all things come out right
So enjoy your Purim where things can turn around
Where blue looks like white and life is upside down
We bring you friendship and food on this special day
And help to add kindness which we know is here to stay