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greenfire
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 Fri, May 31 2013, 10:00 am
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frozen here on the ladder of my life
each day I wake up
& I don't know where I am
the birds still chirp
my heart still beats
frozen here on the ladder of my life
my emotions all have run dry
the tears I don't bother to cry
there's a voice screaming in my head
wake up ~ you know you're not dead
frozen here on the ladder of my life
I want to run
I want to play
I want to sing a melody
climbing upon the ladder of my dreams
surrounding sceneries seem to change
my parents have aged
my children grown
feeling stuck in time with my memories
frozen here on the ladder of my life
I look outside
I see the sky
the trees with bright green leaves wave like a friend
never sure if it's 'hello' or 'good-bye'
frozen here on the ladder of my life
people I know they come ~ they go
flittering like a butterfly
some move away some to their graves
as for me ~ I'm left all alone
frozen here on the ladder of my life
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the world's best mom
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Fri, May 31 2013, 10:04 am
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Wow! That's a great poem! You should write more often. You're good at it.
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greenfire
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Fri, May 31 2013, 10:20 am
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I write quite often ~ I just don't always share
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anonymrs
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Fri, May 31 2013, 11:03 am
 I hope you find meaning in your life.
You write so beautifully.
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robynm
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Fri, May 31 2013, 11:22 am
Really well written! Strong and powerful!!
Hope the stage you're going through passes soon.
PM if you wanna chat about the miseries of life 
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merelyme
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Sun, Jun 02 2013, 12:05 pm
Really nicely done, with great word-pictures.
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PinkFridge
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Sun, Jun 02 2013, 3:54 pm
I don't check in here very often but for you 
Wow. I think it also needs music. Seriously. That's an awesome line that a lot of us can identify with in our own ways.
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Kfar
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Tue, Jun 11 2013, 1:14 am
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Very nice Greenfire feel better!
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kalsee
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Tue, Jun 11 2013, 1:21 am
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That is powerful.
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shosh
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Tue, Jun 11 2013, 2:58 am
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You are a talented writer-and I know just what you mean...
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smilethere
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Tue, Jun 11 2013, 4:58 am
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Phenomenal writing. Hugs.
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geshmak
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Tue, Jun 11 2013, 8:03 am
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Excellent writing, I think it speaks for many of us, going through our own personal situations. I hope you find your way up the ladder very soon!
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amother
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Tue, Jun 11 2013, 9:51 am
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I can relate. Except I feel judged when I am stuck by the people around me who expect me to be moving along with them.
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greenfire
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Mon, Jul 08 2013, 7:35 pm
| amother wrote: | | I can relate. Except I feel judged when I am stuck by the people around me who expect me to be moving along with them. |
don't let people dictate who you are ... move at your own pace ~ even if/when you're stuck
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