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hadasa
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 Tue, Jun 26 2012, 4:12 am
| Quote: | | From the occasional pogroms, bookburnings and destruction of synagogues, to the Nazi massacres and Communist repression of anything Jewish... |
Does this sound right? I feel like something's wrong with the pogroms and bookburnings in plural and the destruction in singular. Should I make it "the occasional pogrom, bookburning and destruction...." or "pogroms, bookburnings and destructions of synagogues"???
TIA!
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sarahd
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Tue, Jun 26 2012, 4:26 am
No, you should make pogrom and book burning singular, since they were "occasional". You should also leave out the comma after synagogues. 
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naomi2
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Tue, Jun 26 2012, 12:37 pm
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the sentence is not finished yet and is already too long. try breaking it up into two sentences.
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