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carrot




 
 
    
 

Post Fri, Aug 19 2005, 8:07 am
I'll finish up this poem and start another one.

THE END

Late one night when everyone was sleeping in their bed
Hindy could not fall asleep, so she got up instead

She put a fuzzy robe on and tiptoed through her home
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technic




 
 
    
 

Post Fri, Aug 19 2005, 9:13 am
and saw her dishes being washed up by a garden gnome!!!!

"thats one less job" she sighed w thanks, and didnt seek another
instead she grabbed the chance of peaceful time on...imamother! LOL

sipping coffee, reading posts, and popping into chat
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Purple Hug Bunny




 
 
    
 

Post Fri, Aug 19 2005, 5:37 pm
she didn't realized for how long she had sat.

She almost fell asleep
When she heard a peep

Her little one had woken up
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de_goldy




 
 
    
 

Post Sat, Aug 20 2005, 10:04 am
Frantically she searches for his sippy-cup!

Moving quickly to his room,
out of the crib she scoops her little goon.

Oh how I love you, she whispers in delight,
kissing and cuddling him oh so tight.

When through the yumminess, she smells a smell...
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1stimer




 
 
    
 

Post Sat, Aug 20 2005, 2:38 pm
oh oh! Boy does it bode well!

Another day has come
A coffee is needed for mom
And make it extra strong...
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Tefila




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Aug 21 2005, 12:25 am
Since I hope this poem won't be long. Wink

Hindy does have other friends u know,
Besides Shprintze, there is also Yoyo.
(thats a name? Scratching Head )
How they love to chit and chat,
And talk sometimes off the hat. Yes

Sometimes toichen does come in.
But w/h disaggreements they don't always win. Banging head

They r still the best of friends though,
B/c sometimes even a friend can say no. Lady Lady

So from this we learn w/hout a doubt
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Purple Hug Bunny




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Aug 21 2005, 11:02 am
That you should never ever shout.

Make sure to always speak nice
Otherwise you might have to pay a price.

Be careful with what you say
And then Moshiach will be on his way

Now I think this poem is done
And we can start another one.

But since I havent got the skill to write
I give the honor to s/one with more insight.
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Mommy912




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Aug 21 2005, 11:05 am
Cohen Family Household Rules

The most important thing
is to make sure to never say,
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Tefila




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Aug 21 2005, 11:16 am
u'r making me crazy go away. shock

I have so much to do,
Can't u see that..... too. What

1st rule calm and patience is the key,
to any familys unity. Lady Lady Lady Lady Lady Lady

2nd rule to be adhered
Yes
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Purple Hug Bunny




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Aug 21 2005, 12:07 pm
And not to be scared

To do things that are right
And not to pick a fight.

another rule would be
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1stimer




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Aug 21 2005, 12:22 pm
Have no more than two rules!

and yes, I know it rhymes not
but so many rules? It makes me all hot
and bothered and kicking and screaming away I run
shouting 'what happened to all the fun?'
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technic




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Aug 21 2005, 12:52 pm
offer mommy a cup of tea!

share ur toys and clear them away
so the house looks tidy at the end of the day

and always, always without fail
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Tefila




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Aug 21 2005, 1:58 pm
remember to check the mail.

Please one should say especially if it's u, Twisted Evil
and ofcourse don't forget to say Thank-You too. Flower

If all the rules r scruplously(sp) kept,
we will be the Happiest family yet. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

But wait there's more,
Cheers
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Mommy912




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Aug 21 2005, 10:51 pm
always remember to clean up the floor.

When the layers of dirt
have covered the shine
and everyone is searching
for their shoes in the grime

That is the time to grab up the mop
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Purple Hug Bunny




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, Aug 22 2005, 12:14 am
So the house doesn't look like a flop

Clean and neat it will always stay
And ppl won't want to run away.

Now this household has got too much rules
and soon we will all look like fools

so this is where it should end
and now I will press on send.
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Mommy912




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, Aug 22 2005, 8:53 pm
Hubby Cohen has just come home
He looks around for his spouse
"Where have you gone to?
I'm looking all over
I hope you are still in the house"

It looks like you did post
some rules you composed
but I can't read it no matter how hard I try
the paper is green
and it fell in the cream
and your writing is making me cry

My dear wife,
please take my advice
it is time to go out and buy
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Purple Hug Bunny




 
 
    
 

Post Mon, Aug 22 2005, 9:40 pm
a catcher to hit the fly

a dishwasher the dishes to wash
and bubbly soap so in the bathtub the children can splash

s/thing good yourself to treat
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Tefila




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Aug 23 2005, 11:08 am
that both of us can eat. Smile

This poem is becoming more fun,
as we all continue to write. Yes
If only I could have this done,
By no later then tonight. Scratching Head

Who knows I may sleep a little better, What
being relaxed and all.
And maybe no need to rely on that heter,
On wether I should return to school Twisted Evil

Well my dear reader what do u say? :
P
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Purple Hug Bunny




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Aug 23 2005, 1:39 pm
Should we continue this way?

We can write and write non stop
But if we write too much it will flop

Do you think we should go on?
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Tefila




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Aug 23 2005, 2:03 pm
Oh yea 100% keep it on the run. Thumbs Up

U see sometimes we can learn more,
when we write this way.
And people won't think we roar, Banging head
if we have mussar to say.

This is a gentle approach which may succeed, Tongue Out
in touching our core.

One may want to heed.
Since thats what imamother 4?!
Flower
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