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Mommy912
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Wed, Aug 17 2005, 7:33 pm
Ok, lets see how creative we are:
Complete the rhyme and add an even number of lines. Leave a rhyme to be completed by the next poster
Hindy Cohen put on her coat
She walked right to the door,
She stopped in her tracks and then she said
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Tefila
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Wed, Aug 17 2005, 7:41 pm
Quote: | Ok, lets see how creative we are: |
Bored more like 8)
"Oh I hope the kids stay in their bed.
I have so much to do, go and see,
and ofcourse stop by shprintze for a cup of tea.
So off hindy went with her purse intact,"
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carrot
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Wed, Aug 17 2005, 8:06 pm
intent on playing the in-control act
but as she closed the door she heard a yell
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hisorerus
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Wed, Aug 17 2005, 8:57 pm
"Yossi's eating bananas and they REALLY SMELL!"
She walked back inside, into her daughter's room
And shpritzed her hand with a little perfume.
She turned back to the door, and was on her way out
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carrot
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Wed, Aug 17 2005, 9:10 pm
when once again she heard a shout
this time the words were scarier still
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Tefila
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Wed, Aug 17 2005, 11:10 pm
Enough to make anyone feel ill.
But this time determined she took a step outside,
Only to hear someone whine "I too want to come for a ride".
Losing her cool and calm demeanor Hindy
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carrot
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Wed, Aug 17 2005, 11:19 pm
peeked outside and saw it was windy
and her car was still buried in snow
from the last snowstorm a winter ago
and the yells and whines were getting so loud
it sounded like hundreds of kids in that crowd
she peaked in the mirror and forced a small grin
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Tefila
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Wed, Aug 17 2005, 11:23 pm
and said no matter what hindy, you're incontrol you'll win.
And resigned herself to making the call,
to let Shprintza know she will not be there after all.
The moral of this Poem,
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carrot
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Wed, Aug 17 2005, 11:35 pm
is to use the telephone
forget trying to leave home,
you'll never get away alone.
but this poem is not yet done
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Mommy912
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Wed, Aug 17 2005, 11:41 pm
because poor poor Hindy has had no fun.
The sitter will manage, the kids love snow
The taxi is waiting, so away we go!
"To where do you want?", the driver says
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technic
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Thu, Aug 18 2005, 2:01 am
And hindy contemplates the different ways
the driver could take her to her friend
via the spa or via the mall
now shes ESCAPED she plans 2 have a ball!
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trafficgal
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Thu, Aug 18 2005, 11:34 am
When suddenly she receives a call!
Oh shucks she thinks I forgot I took my cell phone
Now I really can not escape home
She looks at the caller I.d before picking up
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carrot
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Thu, Aug 18 2005, 1:35 pm
it was shprintze, her friend, with tea in her cup!
hindy snapped that phone open and shouted a greeting
shrprintze! I'm sorry! I forgot our meeting
I'm on the corner of main street, right past the light
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technic
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Thu, Aug 18 2005, 1:57 pm
did I just hear u sneeze? gezundheit!
defrost the cookies and get out the nush
ill b with u soon and im trying 2 rush...
OYYYY! mrs blochs spotted me - u know how she TALKKKKKS!!!
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Tefila
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Thu, Aug 18 2005, 2:05 pm
and lets not even mention now the way she walks.
One shoe size 11 one shoe size 9,
But who am I to judge since it could be mine.
Nosh / poison u said how can u even suggest
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technic
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Thu, Aug 18 2005, 2:27 pm
POISON? try le chocolat, its the BEST!
but mrs bloch wont let me go, im so late!
the cookies will be wayyyyyy past their "sell by" date...
now its starting 2 rain, ive been splashed by a bus
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Rivka
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Thu, Aug 18 2005, 4:11 pm
The driver is laughing,
and my sheitel looks a rag
if I run real fast maybe no one will see
but on second thoughts,
I would look better covered in a bag.
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Mommy912
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Thu, Aug 18 2005, 8:22 pm
so let me get one from under my tree.
The bag is wet, I am a mess
boy this day has gone dreadfully wrong,
My happy escape
is nowhere in sight
I guess it is time for my song.
Ahem (clearing throat) let me start with the words
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Tefila
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Thu, Aug 18 2005, 9:45 pm
And by that time, I might aswell join the birds.
u know just like for everything there is a season,
I learn from here nonething happens w/hout reason.
ANd though I thought I was right, I could've been wrong
B/c my Home, my mikdash is where I truly belong.
On the flip side though
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technic
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Fri, Aug 19 2005, 6:38 am
im ALLOWED 2 go out!!!
a balancing act is what lifes all about...
if I dont get some "ME" time im no use to THEM-
id unravel faster than a dress without hem
so heres what ill do so my day can be fun
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