Home
Log in / Sign Up
    Private Messages   Advanced Search   Rules   New User Guide   FAQ   Advertise   Contact Us  
Forum -> Hobbies, Crafts, and Collections -> The Imamother Writing Club
For my teen daughter



Post new topic   Reply to topic View latest: 24h 48h 72h

amother
OP


 

Post Thu, Oct 31 2019, 4:10 pm
Whirlwind

On the hill where the buildings are towering tall
And the wind tunnels through with a moan in its call
A funnel arose on this drizzly hour
And sent wet leaves swirling in front of the tower.

And hats, coats, umbrellas; all common defenses
Were threatened as if the wind scorned such pretenses.
The trees' bursts of color ripped wetly away
Their past efforts pointless, dissolved in a day.

And I thought of you, lonely and sad in your bed
Facing winds inside and outside your head
Wondering if all you had built up seemed whisked
Right out of your hands, no more left to be risked.

It happens, that cold dissolution of dreams;
The sense that our future is ripped at the seams.
Yet winds move away, and the trees still remain
And hope does reblossom, in spite of the pain.

As you sigh like the winds, and find courage distilled
To pull out of the covers and grimly rebuild
Know that no matter what whirlwinds attack
You already own what you need to push back.

And while dreams get replaced, as you once again start,
Your foundation stands firm in the depths of your heart.
The call still resounds from within, from above:
You can go, you can grow, there's no end to our love.
Back to top

Chayalle




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Oct 31 2019, 4:13 pm
wow....I feel swept away by the quality of writing in this. Your daughter has one special Mom, who gets her in such a deeply sensitive way.
Back to top
Page 1 of 1 Recent Topics




Post new topic   Reply to topic    Forum -> Hobbies, Crafts, and Collections -> The Imamother Writing Club

Related Topics Replies Last Post
My daughter’s wig is so long
by amother
89 Today at 1:10 am View last post
[ Poll ] Tomboy daughter study 36 Sun, Apr 21 2024, 9:57 pm View last post
Asd daughter
by amother
9 Sun, Apr 21 2024, 7:24 am View last post
Who typically pays for phone service for teen cell phone?
by amother
24 Fri, Apr 19 2024, 2:54 pm View last post
Best kosher phone for teen
by amother
2 Fri, Apr 19 2024, 9:43 am View last post